Hi Ataraxia,  here are some corrections.  Red markings indicate a grammar or word order correction. Green indicates a suggestion if a different phrasing would work better, or if I felt that you were unclear.  Nice to hear that this discussion is going on in China. I think it's an important one everywhere.  Keep up the good work (and the good attitude!)  - Daniel

Happiness

Happiness is undoubtedly essential in to our mental health and quality of life living qualities. Some people obtain happiness from friendship and family bonds, and some from achieving their goals or simply winning the games. In recent years there emerges a hot topic has emerged about well-being among Chinese people about well-being. and that is interestingly being used for questions The question being asked is (better: the question people are asking is: ‘Are you happy?’

Though happiness is a widely-used word, it can be hard to define because people understand this the word differently, and everyone can define it for themselves as there is no standard measure of happiness. Take me for example. I consider happiness as to be a mental state of peace and richness. I could feel pleasant happy either I stay spending time with my family and friends, or I read reading books or just wandering around alone while listening to some music. Yet another group of there are other people who think they can gain that wealth can bring about happiness as long as they are affluent .  That is true to some extent since money would does bring us a better improve our standard of living and is an incentive for us to do what we like. (I think you mean:  money enables us to do what we like.  It is an incentive for us to work hard, but is that what we like?)

It is exactly because of the hard definition of difficulty defining happiness that there appears to be a wide range of ways (better: so many ways) to achieve happiness. But there are still limited certain factors that are important in obtaining happiness. Firstly,Most importantly: do Follow your heart and take your dreams and hobbies seriously. Only when people are not swayed by others’ opinions that they can they gain real (better: true) happiness. Secondly Also, read more books or go to different places and get exposed to various cultures. We should broaden our minds and always enrich our spiritual world so as to make our life more colorful and experienced our experience (deeper? more meaningful?). Besides, Talk with different kinds of people. whatever they are?? Some you may find interesting, others intelligent or inspiring. Sometimes, what we get from those such communication contact can be far more than we thought expected.