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Guten Tag! Ich bin eine Studenin und wohne in China. I am focusing on learning German currently. Because I am going to study in germany soon. I have learnt german for about one and a half year,and I am more than happy to help you with Chinese. Schönen Tag noch!
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    互联网时代的总结归纳

    最近,乐视网播放了一部名为《互联网时代》的电视剧,其内容主要关于(去掉相)近代(近时代,去掉时,近代,但是我觉的用‘现代’更好一些)高科技的进步过程与历史。

    《互联网时代》中的第二集,以硅谷已上市的高科技公司,如脸谱、雅虎、谷歌、搜狐等公司为主要讲述的内容。在该节目当中,所有的被采访者都是高科技行业相关人物、风险投资者、创业者等重要人物。通过被采访者对于创业以及投资的丰富经验(由于被采访者对于创业以及投资有丰富的经验),该节目确切地为观众展示出创业必有的创新性与投资的危险(危险性,与一般列举的都比较一致)。然而,除此之外,《互联网时代》仍将最重大的注意力(最大的注意力)围绕在创业的积极性及投资对于刚创立公司的益处上(加个上,围绕在,,,,上)。

    该节目的片头中,以阿基米德两千多年提出表述沙漠中所有沙粒的数量,亦十的一百次方,一个超过于宇宙中所有事物总和的数量,来形容人类思维的卓越与深度。其目的是为了证明,无论什么时代,人类的思维一直都如此杂而不乱。如今,我们会利用自己的高端思维来做些诸如创业、研究科学的新领域、解决他人的问题等给以世上各人利益的事情。

    此后,该节目剩下的时间涉及到年轻创业者、硅谷高科技公司、风险投资者及公司上市的事项。

    在《互联网时代》中,创业与硅谷高科技公司的这两话题有着亲切的关系。换言之,在该节目所讲述的公司之中,除了中国高科技公司之外,绝大多数的高科技公司在美国加州距离斯坦福大学较近名为硅谷的业区创立而成。整部记录片所讲述到关于创业者及硅谷高科技公司的内容,大都包括这些公司上市以及创造的商品,比如90年代网景公司设计的人机界面操作性便捷的快速浏览器。此外,据《华尔街日报》报道,网景上市的那一天,在一分钟之内使自己的市值达成27亿美元。在整部记录片中,讲述到的大都是与网景公司相似的诸如雅虎、谷歌、苹果等其它高科技公司创业及上市的成功故事。

    从采访几位风险投资者的经验的这一角度来讲,该节目的内容可谓丰富多彩。《互联网时代》中,通过采访风险投资者的这一方式以描述几家高科技公司上市的好坏。据来自于意大利的某位投资者称,在硅谷高科技公司90年代末期开业的爆发之后不久时,向其投资便可拿到良好的回报。但与之相反,在2000年代初期与中期,因股份不像之前那么高,所以当时愿意投资硅谷高科技公司的投资者并不多。

    最后,在片尾中,脸谱创造者马克·扎克伯格表示,如今,由于社交软件与其它具联系作用的设备的存在,人们随时随地都能够联系到任何人,因而我们之间的距离正在越来越最小化(正在趋于最小化)。除此之外,扎克伯格还鼓劝观众,若有自己创业的愿望,那么尽量实现这个梦想,因为现在正是创业的佳期。

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    August 31, 2015
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    HSK3 汉字 (126-130)

    极
    极少数人民住(活)超过了一百年(岁)。

    极少数人活过了一百岁,

    活alive, 我还活着 I am still alive, 我住在中国 I live in China.

    岁year, for people, 年year , for something
    Very few people live more than a 100 years.

    普
    普通话,汉语,中文,都一样。
    The common dialect, Mandarin and Chinese are one and the same. 

    Good job!
     
    境
    这所工厂的产品是出境(口)。

    出境,(people) go abroad ,  出口, (productions ) are exported
    This factory's products are exported.

    楼
    健身房在下楼(楼下)。

    楼下 downstairs。 下楼 go downstairs
    The gym is downstairs.

    满
    他对生活很满足。
    He is satisfied with his life.

    This scentence is ok.

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    July 26, 2015
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    日常生活=daily life 生活=life 生活化, I try to explain 化 first, simple=简单 simplify=简单化 So it means something relates to daily life or is suitable for daily life.
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    July 24, 2015
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    You can say 吃了 . You can say 没吃or 没有, if you hadn't eaten.
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    July 24, 2015
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    Watership Down 第二章: Cornflax (part one)

    从前,几个兔子逃跑出Sandleford。Sandleford的士兵要阻止他们,但是Bigwig(一个士兵)帮(了,This chinese character can show it is past tense)他们。Fiver,Hazel,跟几个朋友跑进森林里面。
    Once upon a time, some rabbits escaped from Sandleford. Sandleford's soldiers tried to stop them, but Bigwig (a soldier) helped them. Fiver, Hazel and a few friends ran into the woods.
    Cóngqián - once (upon a time)
    táopǎo chū - escape from
    shìbīng - soldier/s
    bāng tāmen - help/s them
    sēnlín - wood/forest
    pǎo - run
    pǎo jìn sēnlín lǐmiàn - ran into the woods/forest

    这是第二章。
    This is Chapter Two.

    我们的朋友(我们的朋友们都是,because you use 'friends',it would be better to translate it into 朋友们,for example, Jake is our friend. 杰克是我们的朋友,Jake's friens are nice, 杰克的朋友们都很好。)很英勇的兔子。但是,在Sandleford的外面,他们是孤单的。他们很英勇,可是有时候他们也怕。
    Our friends are very brave rabbits. However, outside of Sandleford, they are all alone. They are brave, but sometimes they are scared, too.
    hěn yīngyǒng - brave
    zài Sandleford de wàimiàn - outside of Sandleford
    gūdān de - all alone
    yǒu shíhòu tāmen yě pà - sometimes they are scared, too

    他们走了很远。有一天他们看见一个兔子。他又帅;又胖。他的毛很漂亮。他是Cornflax。
    They walked a long way. One day, they met a rabbit. He was handsome and fat. His fur was beautiful. This was Cornflax.
    Tāmen zǒuliǎo hěn yuǎn - they walked a long way
    kànjiàn - met/saw
    máo - fur

    Cornflax告诉他们,“我跟很多的兔子住在一个很棒的地方。有很美丽(它it ,很美beautiful,);又有很多的食物。你们可以跟我们一起住。我们的家有很多的食物。我们的生活很简单。”
    Cornflax told them, "I live with many rabbits in a wonderful place.It's beautiful, and there is plenty of food. You can come and live with us. Our home has lots of food. Our lives are easy."
    shíwù - food
    Nǐ kěyǐ gēn wǒmen yīqǐ zhù - you can live with us
    shēnghuó - life

    Good job! Your chinese is great!

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    May 30, 2015
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    April 10, 2015
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    April 10, 2015
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    The Eclipse of The Moon Last Night Yesterday, I walked on the raod and happened to saw a man telling his son 'look, it is the eclipse of the moon! ' After that, I did not care what the boy was going to do and began to stare at the moon, But nothing special, it is just a still crescent moon in the sky. Five minutes later, I got home and see the moon again. It seemed to change a little bit, but I still do not sure about that. Then I looked at the calendar and found it should be a full moon in the sky. I was excided and was going to see the full moon came back. By the way, it was the second time I watch the eclipse of the moon, and I thought this time the moon changed a little slower than the last time I had saw. Last time was in summer and this time was in early spring. Could it be possible if it happens in different season? Or the season influenced my sense of time. Because it is really coid to stand at balcony for about 20 minutes in early spring night. Talking about the eclipse of the moon, there is a funny tale. Ancient people do not know the science theory behind the phenomena of eclipse. So they made a story themselves. There was an evil dog living in the sky. It always yearned for the moon and wanted to eat it. When the eclipse happened, ancient people believed it meant the dog started eating their beautiful moon, So ancient people decided to do something to save the moon, They try all their ways to make loud noise, and tried to frighten the evil dog away. Of course, ancient people won every time! Thank you so much for reading this and I would be appreciate if you can correct my mistakes. Have a good day, everyone!
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    我想假装我自己是俄罗斯人。

    你想知道为什么吗(There is a little difference between '呢‘ and '吗’,you can use '呢‘ like this :你猜这是为什么呢?)?因为上次我在中国,很多人以为我是俄罗斯人。他们觉得我真的很像俄罗斯人。当然我只想在中国假装。

    我唯一的原因是我想提高我的中文水平。所以如果我假装我是俄罗斯人的话,我还可以假装我不会说英语。所以他们最好说汉语。呵呵呵

    我觉得很多中国人还学习英语、西班牙、法语,还有德语等等,所以我不可以假装我来自那些国家。但我认为学俄语的中国人是比较少的,所以大部分中国人肯定不会说俄语。你觉得呢?

    虽然我想说汉语,但我不想骗人。你觉得这办法怎么样?可能这是一个比较奇怪的办法。哈哈哈

    You chinese is great, and I think there is to need to pretend to be a russian. if you want to practice chinese you can just ask them directly, and most of people will be glad to do that. It is always good to help others.

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    April 3, 2015
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    我這個月的生活

    我這個月的生活

     ('生活' is a noun, '這個月的' is an adjective, because of the symbol chinese character '的'. so ' my wonderful life' and 'my life this month' can be translated into the same form, ”我美好的生活“and”我这个月的生活“)

    我在星期天完成漢語水平考試一。 現在能說中文上1/2. 我已经(to emphasize 'have done')學習漢語兩個半月了。 我想快点學習(adverb+verb); 很忙了,可是高興。
    明早,有一個電路分析考試。 我想它将会很難。 我複習了很多了,可是我想我不可能完成。
    然後下星期,有軍隊訓練在Arizona在美國. 我需要去,但我也想去。 我想下星期我和軍隊到那去会很开心。 
     Personally think you have already learned chinese very fast. Good job!



    My life this month.


    On Sunday, I compelted HSK (Hanyu Shuiping Kaoshi) Level 1. I now speak Chinese at level 1/2. I have studied for two and a half months. I feel like I am learning very fast. I'm very busy, but very happy [with my progress.]
    Tomorrow, I have a Circuit Analysis exam. I feel that it will be difficult. I have review very much, however I feel I cannot complete it (I want to say "pass" it).
    Then, next week, I have army training in Arizona, USA. I am required to go, but I also WANT to go. I feel like I will be happy to be there with the army next week.

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    April 3, 2015
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