What do you think about my English pronounсiation? (2)

What do you think about my English pronounсiation? This is  my spontangeous speech. Please correct my mistakes if you find some and compare my two recordings.

 

My last recording:

https://soundcloud.com/liteyshik/how-i-learn

My first recording: (This is not my spontangeous speech, I read an article.)

https://soundcloud.com/liteyshik/the-day-of-the-dead

Corruption in FIFA Switzerland's police's arrested fourteen FIFA's head members. It's because of a massive corruption in the biggest football organization. Well, better late than never, but why police's turned a blind eye to a mess until now? I think, Blatter and all of decrepit functionaries in charge of a huge corruption. Anyway, this accident had coincided with sanctions on Russia. Next step must be to rob World Football Championship from Russia. In that case, it'll be a really unfair to Russians, but maybe it's just a gossip. So, time will tell.

What do you think about my English pronounсiation?

What do you think about my English pronounсiation? It is not my spontangeous speech, I have just recorded an article, that Ive read.

 

https://soundcloud.com/liteyshik/the-day-of-the-dead

Difficulties in Learning When I started learning English four months ago I thought that only one thing what I need is a motivation. But than I've found a lot of problems: First of all, people don't want to help with articles. I definitely know that English native speakers are not enough on italki to check all of articles in English. And of course I know that all people have lots of things to do in their real lives apart correcting articles. Anyway, it's a real problem. Second of all, I can't find a penpal. I have a conversation with a native speaker once a week but it's not enough for me. I need a permanent chatting. Third of all, I want to visit an English Speaking Club in my city, but, unfortunately, I haven't found anyone who wants to join it. By the way, lots of people who learning a second language, no matter what kind of language it is, haven't got enough motivation. They learning it for fun or like a smart hobby. Symply saying, it's a very hard to find a like-minded person in a language-education field.

Unemployment and Underemployment Nowadays, this is a really serious problem in all over the world. In Russia an unemployment isn't an important problem, but too many graduates have to change a career path because of a offensive income. Lots of graduates, who graduated technical universities, work in a trade field. In that case, it means that the government spent a lot of money for nothing. The most important reason is because graduates aren't be able to earn as much as they are be able to earn in a trade field. This is a really frustrating situation, because directors don't want to pay appropriate salary for a qualify labor, and graduates don't want to work for an inappropriate salary too. The government in charges for this situation and for decrease of Russian heavy industry. Russia is becoming an rough country.

The Mother's Fund The most important social program in Russia is the Mother's Fund. It's a social dotation for a second child in a family. This dotation is about 450 thousand roubles. This is a very helpful, especially for young families. They can spend money to increase their living area or like a first payment for a mortgage. Unfortunately, the Russian government always discusses about its necessity. In my view, this is only one really useful and helpful social program, which must stay for a long time.