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两系“总是”和“从来不(or从不,sometimes it'll be better)”用法
小的时候,Lily 总是喜欢跟她的玩具熊睡觉。
我从来不听说唱音乐。 (Well done!)我总是想全世界旅游。
The Spoken language:我总是想到全世界去旅游。
The written language:我总想环游世界。(less words"环游世界"~~~less words “总想”,it'll be better)
很难给他礼物,他从来不看起来高兴我给他买的东西。
给他买礼物真难,我给他买的东西他从来不感兴趣。
我从来不看电视,因为我认为它很无聊,还有就是一个浪费时间。
还有一个就是浪费时间。(Better)
另一方面,我总是在 facebook 上浪费很多太多(better)时间。
Distinguish:另一方面,我总是在facebook 上花费很多时间。
(浪费太多means you think it is useless, so you say 浪费太多。But "花费很多" just means you spend lots of time on it )
每天早上我总是喝一杯新鲜的热咖啡,这是我最喜欢的一天的时间之一。
这是一天之中我最喜欢的时间之一。
(eg. 这是所有书之中我最喜欢的其中一本or书之一。)
我姐姐的家总是很整洁,很舒适。 (Wonderful~~)
与其(让我is emited here)吃生日蛋糕,不如让我吃一碗水果,因为我从来不吃糖。Distinguish: 与其让你吃生日蛋糕,不如让我吃(生日蛋糕 is emited here)。
0 votedMarch 5, 20150Some difficult sentences(Indeed) from exercise. Not sure about word order and prepositions.
1. - 口语教给我们谁?
- 王老师 。
-教我们口语的(人or老师)是谁?or 谁(who)教(teaches)我们口语(us oral E)?(It's also correct and it's easier for you to understand)
(“的是谁” = “的人or老师是谁”, we omit"人",because we know what it refers to )
2. - 你们的图书馆是新的吗?
- 是新的。or是。or 是(emit"新")的。3. - 你借什么杂志在图书馆?(a bit weird)
- 我借新杂志。
-你在图书馆借什么杂志?
4. 我学习在外语学院的中文系。
我在外语学院(的)中文系学习。
5. 他是中国人。他常帮助给他的朋友学习汉语。(帮助 and 给 both are verb, but there's one sentence and one subject)
他总是/常常帮助他的朋友学习汉语。
6. 我不认识他。 请互相介绍我们。 (I don't know what you want to express)
①请互相介绍。means people introduce themselves to each other.
②请你介绍一下我们。means ask others to instroduce ourselves.
7. 欢迎他们来喝茶。
(You should say "欢迎他们来(去)剧院"。Come here=过来/来这里。 Go there= 去那里。Totally different)
8. - 我有二本(we often say "两本" rather than “二本”)词典。 一个是大乚本是小。 你借哪一本?
我有两本词典。一本是大的,一本是小的。你要借哪本?
- 请借你小本。-请你借我小本的。
①Give me the small one=请(you can emit你)借我小本的(you can emit书)。So "please" =请你/请(你)
②I lend you the small one=我借你小本的。
0 votedMarch 3, 20150照片描述:我的狗狗朋友 :)
让我给您们(“您”don't +们)介绍我小朋友!
让我给您(or你们)介绍我的小朋友吧!
拍照时(Great,hh),我们在一个很有魅力的地方,叫Barna树林,为这里遛狗很方便。(a bit weird)
我们在Barna树林这个很有魅力的地方拍照,这里遛狗很方便。
在我车的后面里可以看到三只狗狗。
在左边的一只叫Shiba, 她是我的狗(It's a bit weird, because "狗" in China also means someone always flatter others or someone is very means or***. And the way you express is a bit confusing if reader only see this sentence. Besides, "她是我的狗" is aslo used when you argue with others about whether the dog is yours. )。
最左边的那只叫Shiba, 她是我养的(tend tone)。
她是一个网球玩儿狂,也是一个运动迷,我们一起常常做够敏捷训练。
她爱极了网球,也是一个运动迷,我们常常一起做(hh, sorry, I don't konw what "够敏捷训练" refers to)
她旁边的两只狗是我朋友的。 (Well done!!)
中间的一只(or那只)是Rosie,她是最小的之一(means there're others which are the same age/size/so on as it though it's very small=one of)。
中间的那只叫Rosie, 她是最小的一只。
她看起来一点儿像一个小玩具熊因为她一直在都想要依偎(+,,,)。
她看起来有点儿像一个小小的玩具熊,因为她一直想要依偎着她的主人。
最后的狗狗叫Bru,他的耳朵很长, 所以他跑的时候看起来很好笑!(pretty good!)
他会用鼻子找东西,找得非常好。(It's still a bit weird. There're TWO sentences)
他鼻子找东西可厉害了!
他们都很兴奋,因为下车以后我们都一起(都=一起here)去树林里玩儿一下。(Please pay attention to tense. “玩儿一下”= the future tense )
他们都很兴奋,因为下车后我们一起去树林里玩了一下(the past tense)。
0 votedMarch 3, 20151写得太棒了,很有韵味。
安静的夜
是早上三小时("三小时"means 3 hours)。我还醒着呢。街上没有声响。大部分在城市的人睡觉(a litter weird)。凌晨三点,我仍未入眠。街上已无声响,城里人也已酣甜于梦乡中。
几个小时后人们会(将会)开始开动(1),车也会开始开动。人们要买卖各种各样的东西了,要说百万词了,要写百万字了,要生产百万东西了。一部分的要高兴了,一部分的要难过了。大部分的人不会记得这个日(2)。再过几小时,人们便开始忙碌了,车辆也将奔驰。买卖的叫喊声也将弥漫在空气中,千言万语,繁华琐事,悲喜交加,可又会有谁记得这个平凡的日子?
现在的我(or 现在,我)有夜这么安静。几个小时就后不知道了(3)。
现在的我,犹如这安静的夜。只是在这之后又有谁能说得准呢?
我想到李白的诗《静夜思》(4),但是我不能是地上结了霜因为这里炎热的夏天,而且还不看到月亮。
我想到了李白的《静夜思》,只是这儿炎炎夏日、乌云蔽月,地上又怎会结霜?
我应该去床睡觉,但是不要。我知道在工作小时我要困倦了。没问题。有咖啡,在办公室最喝的毒品(refers to heroin, mariguana and so on )。今天我比平常需要喝多得多(5)。我该去睡觉了,但我不想。我知道工作时我又要困倦了。没问题,有咖啡,办公室里最常喝的药物。今日,“多多益善”。
(1) In a couple of hours people will begin to move.
I am not very sure about the use of 要…了 and 会in this paragraph to express what will happen in a couple of hours or during the day that is about to begin.
(2) Most part of the people won’t remember this day.
(3) Right now I am as quiet as the night. I don’t know if in a couple of hours I will still feel like this.
(4) Li Bai’s poem 静夜思comes to my mind.
(5) No problem. There is coffee, the most widely consumed drug in offices. I will have to drink more than usual.0 votedMarch 2, 20152- Start from the small things With the development of technology, people have become fast and anxious when they dispose everything, like housework, homework and operation. From my personal perspective, doing something small, we are enabled to accumulate experience, helping us solve any problems fast and effectively. Besides, it's a marvelous way for us to master skills which have an important role on student practical ability as well as ability to train professional positions. Last but not least, solving everything from a first step can train ourselves to be more patient so that we can cultivate our character. As Aristotle once said 'Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly. ' So let us do it.March 2, 201541
- Should We Help Strangers? Some people hold the belief that it's a virtue of human beings to help strangers because it feels great when they offer or are offered help. Besides, what we did is exactly to prove that not only are we trusted and needed but we have the capacity for social assistance. However, others think that so trouble and dangerous is it that we shouldn't help the strangers. To begin with, they debate that what they get at last are not the appreciation but an evil action which the strangers reward us with. Furthermore, what if we have physical limitations? If we still stick to do it, we may kill ourselves. From my personal perspective, there's no doubt that we should manage to help strangers. Meanwhile, we're supposed to be alert to each stranger under no circumstance in case of getting cheated. What's more, it's momentous to protect yourself and turn to others.March 2, 201510
Sentence Patterns 2
I have a lot of sentences that just need checking I have written what I have tried to translate in english and even if you just check over a few sentences then over time all of them will be checked I couldn't fit all of them onto this so I will add a few other entries as well
They spoke in French first, then in Chinese 他们先说了法语,再中文他们先说法语,再说中文。
I want another apple 我再想苹果我想要另一个苹果。
They are going to wait another 10 minutes for him 他们在等他十分钟他们再等他十分钟。
We want to eat another bowl of beef noodles because today we celebrate Chinese New Year 我们想再吃饭一碗牛肉面,因为今天我们过年I want some more time to finish 我想再完成时候
我想再多点时间来完成。
I went to the park with my girlfriend again 我在公园和我的女朋友又去了我和我女朋友又去了公园。
He couldn't sleep last night again 他上个晚上又睡不着了他昨晚又睡不着了。
We went swimming at the pool again 我们在游泳池里又游泳了They went to another party 他们又去了排队
他们去了另一个派对。
I searched again and again, but still couldn't find my keys 我找了又找,还是没找到我的钥匙I did many maths problems again and again 我做了又做很多数学题
我做了很多数学题,一遍又一遍。
(“做了又做”和“找了又找”后面不加宾语。)
I must do my homework 我得(必须)做我的作业He has to work every day 他每天得(or不得不)工作
We have to go to Spain 我们得去西班牙
They must walk to the shops 他们得走路去商店
I must fly to school 我得开飞机上学
I went to China with my friend (emphasise China) 我跟我的朋友是去了中国的
He died in a car yesterday with his mum (emphasise in a car) 他昨天是在汽车跟她的妈妈死亡了的昨天,他和他的妈妈是死在了汽车里。
Our family had a big house in America (emphasise big house) 我一家人在美国有了是一个大房子的我们一家人在美国是有一间大房子。
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