A New Cell Phone and the Big Cleaning.

I got up at 8 am with a slight headache. I did not want to go anywhere today but I had to go to school. When I was at school my headache did not leave me. I felt really awful and it was noticed by my friends and teachers. It was good that we were let to go earlier today and I headed to the technical store to buy a new mobile phone because my old phone broke down. I wanted to buy the cheapest one but there were so many good phones and they were not sovery expensive. I did not want to buy atake sensory(do you mean touch screen?) phone because I am tired of them. I want more towould rather have a phone with buttons. So, I bought phone with buttons. It was a black "Nokia". There was a camera if UFO flys beside me (I did not understand this part), music app to listen to Justin Bieber, gallery, some games that I do not need at all and, of course, Tthe Internet - great and powerful. The most wonderful thing is as I bought a new thing, my headache disappeared! That is why women are so wasteful! I went home smiling. When I came home I decided to have a rest and a little nap but I could not fall asleep and began to investigate a new purchase. By the way, my headaches began ever since I had beenbegan staying with puppies under the sun for a long time. Maybe, this is reason of my pain. Afterwards my mum asked me to help her with cleaning. We had to prepare the summer kitchen for exploitation (do you mean preparation?). Every summer we move to this kitchen but first of all, it must be pureclean. It was is a really good pastime! I was talking to my mum about everything, she told me some German phrases because she had been learning it at school but now she remembers nothing. An interesting thing is that my granny, mother and brother had been learning German at school but nobody knows anything except general phrases. I am the only one member in our family who speaks not only Russian. Yes, I can speak English a bit. By the way, I stopped learning English words and get am now more focused on English phrases. I created some cards and carry around it them around. Thus, I learn 20 cards forevery day. Well, despite the headache it was a very good day! It would be much better if I got a correction from you! Bye.

Vancouver, Canada is my favourite city

My Mother.

Today I would wantlike to tellwrite about my mother. First of all, she is my closest friend and I am a really happy person to have understood it in so little that at such a young age. Sometimes, having lived all their lifes, people don’t realize that their parents are the greatest people in their life. InAt the beginning, I didn’t understand it tooeither but when my friends let myme down and I stood alone, they were the single people who loved and accepted me as I am. Then I realized the most important thing in my life – I must take care of my family, love them and protect them as they do to me. So, my little family consists only fromof only 4 members. The head of it is my mother. Also it concludesincludes my granny and two older brothers. They are already adults already. I am youngest in my family. As I already said, my mother is the main person because she provides us with food, clothes and she pays for all our expenses. That is why she must work almost every day. And it is the saddest thing in my life because my mum deserves a better life. Because of her hard work she has lost much weight and now she looks tortured. Sometimes she gets after me without any reason but still I understand that I don’t have to be rude towards her and I keep silent. So thatBecause she works so often I only get to see her once in a blue moon. I miss her very much! Therefore, sometimes I feel lonely and get rude towards another people. She works a lot but still she has free time. In her free time she likes creating something new. I think she is thea genius! For example, she can make a something she has seen only one timeonce. Thus, she created an entire series of handmade bags. What’s more, she is a very intelligent woman. She reads a lot and recommends me some books to read. I suppose I inherited my reading interest from her. Also she is a very kind person but she considers herself to be misanthropeic. I noticed that exactlyonly kind people became misanthropic. They must get over their kindness to survive in our society. People always use people such as my mum is to get their own benefit. Do you think so? I do. She helps people in need, she survivesprotects abandoned animals and provides them with food and shelter and medical treatment. I think she is the kinder than most people around the world. By the way, she is very pretty, she has the traditional Russian appearance: big blue eyes, blonde hair,and regular features. I wish I were her! I am not so pretty. I can discridecould describe her forever, but I have to stop because my signsideas are all used up. I would be glad to get a correction from you. Goodbye.

What"s my mother eating?

My mum has begun ignoring me. When I tell her something, she doesn't pay attention to me. I don't know what I've done wrong. It looks like she is angry with me, but when I ask her she replies she is okay. I think she is just very tired from working hard. Most of the time she is working and I can see her only in the morning when preparing for school. I don't understand a womens mind at 50 years, although I tend to think that it doesn't matter what age women are, they are always need to be loved and be taken care of. Nowadays women must be both a woman and a man at the same time. I don't know about other countries and nations but women living in Russia cannot count on men. After a divorce women often stay alone without any help. This happened to my mother too. That's why I am trying to study well and after get a good job in order to be independent. I am a bit of a feminist. It's just my mother needs more love and free time like any other woman on the Earth who must work her whole life to provide their children with food, clothes, good education and just happy life. However, children don't get the most important thing - love.

Very good writing, easy to understand although you could often join two small sentances together with a conjunction (and, but, or). You should also never start a sentance with the word "and".