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Hi there, I am Emily from Japan. Currently I am taking an MA course in London. My background is graphic design and my current major is sort of experience design.(But not exactly it is... it's so complicated to describe here:P) Anyway I am looking for a native English speaker who can have a look and correct my writing things(essay). It is great if you have an interest in design area. And of course if you need to learn Japanese I can offer to teach you. I am quite good at writing, if it's in Japanese. haha
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    Actually if you directly translate this sentence, it would be a bit strange. なまけるis verb, なまけものis noun (lazy person), I know it's kind of correct because you want to stop being lazy. These words wouldn't be used like that. なまけもの is also the name of Folivora (animal), we sometimes use this word in a funny way. If I just correct in keeping you're original sentence. 私になまけものをやめるの時間である。--->私はなまけものをやめる時間である。 Further, you can say なまけること(if you put こと, this word is going to be a noun) をやめる( to stop) 私になまけものをやめるの時間である。--->私はなまけることをやめる。 If you want to emphasis "time for me" (but this sounds bit weird) 私になまけものをやめるの時間である。---> (今がorこれは)私にとって、なまけるのをやめる時間だ。 Or you can say more casually, 私はなまけるのをやめる。(I'm going to stop being lazy) なまけるのをやめるべきだ。(I need to stop being lazy) Hope it could answer for your question :)
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    February 16, 2015
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    Writing Practice About Me
     

    私 は ロンドン に すんで います。
    I live in London.

    ロンドン は イギリス の おおきい とし です。
    London is a big city in England.

    800 万 ぐらい の 人  が ここ に すんで います。
    Around 8 million people live here.

    イギリス は ふるくてい と にぎやか な ばしょ です。 それは ここには たくさん グリーン のです。のみどりがあります。 

    England is an old and busy place. It is very green.  I think if you say that in Japanese "There is lots of green" can be more natural.

    私 は には おとうと と いもうと を もって います。 がいます。 We use "もつ" ”もっている” for only object. It sounds like you're owned a person.

    I have a little sister and a little brother.

    私 の ともだち は の(but I think it's not necessary) エミリー に も ロンドン に すんで います。 

    My friend Emily lives in London too.

     

    Well done :)

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    February 15, 2015
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    Relationship to your clothes Hi there, Currently I am going to launch a project which is building up an intimate relationship between people and a specific clothes. I am going to write some background and rationale of my project here. It would be great if you could give me your opinion if you've got an interest in this project. Here is the Background of my project//// The history of clothes is also a history of human beings, we wear clothes to protect our bodies, to show identity in the social context and to show our personalities. The main purpose to dress has been changing with the times. From the late 19th century, the idea of pret-a-porter has been established and after the second world war, this type of clothing successfully dominated the fashion market. Hence, it is easy for the general public to purchase new clothes. In other words, it means that people can only buy mass-production ready-to-wear products from a shop. Many fashion brands do two seasonal collections every year. They are known for creating trends that change with the reflection of the current culture we live in. Thus, clothing itself is a disposal product and it is a crucial part of the context of fashion. Besides the publicity of clothing, is the process of manufacturing glamour, and it is pushing us into a consumer society that we change ourselves by our lives as we buy something more. Moreover, since mid- 2000s, fast fashion brands became quickly popular and reproduced designs were used more frequently. These are examples of how the consuming cycle moves in a quicker pace. The majority of people enjoy expressing their personalities through their style, however some people called “Neophilia” can have a strong affinity for novelty, (Winifred 2011) especially fashion-oriented neophytes who as followers are quickly consuming the newest look, and believe their identities are contained within this. In the light of the background information shown depicting modern trends, it would seem that problems of environmental sustainability or loss of individual identity could be a cause for concern.
    February 15, 2015
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