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Hi, guys!

I need to practice English urgently because I need to read and speak well. I don't know about what to write here, maybe my historypast... or not.
I like to study languages. A long time ago, I started Esperanto, Deutsch, English and Spanish. But I learned only the basics.
My hobbies are literature, astronomy, sciences, music, etc. I love to learn the Bible too. I like sports, but I don't know to play very well. I'm brazilian but I don't like football, I prefer other sports.
How is the culture in your country? Maybe I can to talk with you about Brazil in another moment.

Cordially,

Cordially is not that comonly used in English to end a letter. Usually you would say: best regards, warm regards, sincerely, etc.

All the best with your English learning! You are at the right place =)

whether Whether allowing working at home is good

Nowadays, an increasing number of employers employees (employers employ employees =) are permitted to work without going to their offices. (remember to put a spacing after the punctuations)At the same time,whether it is beneficial to companies and individuls has been a hot debated topic (either "hot topic" or "much debated topic") in societies (not necessary).In this eassy,I will elaborate both sides and extent my own p respective perspective.
Considering working effciency aspects, permitting workers to finish their daily tasks may not as fast as in offices (workers may not finish their tasks at home as fast as in offices),which causes numerous negative impacts to companies' profits.This is because employersees who working work at home can easily attracted be distracted by many things,such as an interesting television programme,their adorable children appearances and so on.Offices,on the other hand,provide a quiet environment for employersees to work in there so that they are capable of concentrating and completing able to concentrate and to complete their assignments much more quickerquickly (or much faster).Moreover,without the instructions given by their supervisors of companies, employersees are more likely to make a vast number of mistakes. To illustrate this point further, some employersees do not have enough experiences to deal with a task by themselves.By following the instructions of a supervisor, they can complete their tasks accurately and efficiently. Besides, many workers do not have self-restraint ability self-restraint/ self-control.Thus, working at home will make them become more and more slothful(not commonly used... usually found in literature or the bible...).
On the positive side, it may be true that (if you say "it may be true that..." I would expect a "but" in the second part of the sentence) workers are have less pressures when working at home, because there are no restrictions and they can flexibly arrange their time to finish the tasks. In addition, commuter commuting in during rushing hours is also a servere problem for employersees, which can be avoided if they work at home. As resulted a result, they have more time to focusinge on their tasks.
Overall, though working at home may be beneficial for minor a minority of employersees. But, I am firmly convinced that its disadvantages greatly outweigh its disadvantages. Allowing employersees to work at home not only cause impacts on affects the companies’ incomes but also makes individuals become lazier in their life.

Hi August! It is great to see that you are putting a lot of effort into your writing! Keep it up!

The flow of the article is much better than the other one that I read (about studying history). However, there are a lot more minor mistakes (spelling, singular/ plural, verb forms and tenses etc). And do remember to add a space after the punturations. This can be easily corrected with Microsoft Word or free tools online (so your readers can focus more on other things in your essay =)

The Brazilian Culture - part I

The Brazilian culture is beauty Beautiful.
We have incredible parties, such as the carnival, the São João party, and flocloric festival of Parintins the Parintins Folklore Festival (I think this is its official name in English).
Although it has been celebrated for by babinonicys (what is "babinocicys"?) and the greeks as well, the carnaval is a better party of brazilian culture(Do you mean "the carnival is given most importance in Brasilian culture" or "the best carnival party is found in Brazil"?) . It all began whem when Black Africans were brought to Brasil and gave they started street party, Known known as Entrudo. So latter the Entrudo was conquering space between Blacks and Whites (I am not sure what you are trying to say...).Over the years, the Entrudo has been transformed into masked balls for the Carioca elite. The Carnival only took to the streets again from with the Sapucaí parades. Currently the Carnaval is celebrated between February and March, but throughout the year have there are Samba circles and balls that we call the Gafiera.

Hello! I learnt a lot of interesting things about Brazil. Looking forward to Part II =)

My mexican life!

I'm so new in this haha! Well, Like as I said in my biography, my name is Ilayali and I live in Mexico, but... How is my Mexican life? Is It is good! I don't work so I have more time to study and right now I'm in on holiday,. I love Mexico because it's beautiful, even though I've not got time to visit new regions but Mexico it's is so speciall! The people here is are ("gente" is singular but "people" is plural =P)nice with towards/to each others and I can say yeah I love my Mexican life.

Bienvenido a Italki =) ¡Que bueno! Espero poder ir a Mexico un día =)