我的白天

今天早上我六点钟起床。把我女朋友的儿子叫醒以后，我洗了个澡。 我吃了早饭然后坐公共汽车去上班。在我工作的地方的前面，有家很有意思的咖啡店。在那儿我跟我的同事一起喝了杯咖啡。
(Today I woke up at 6。after having waken up my girlfriend's son, I took a shower. Before taking the bus to work, I ate breakfast. My work is located in front of an interesting coffee shop. There, I drank coffee along with my teammates).

。。。对不对？：）