我的白天

今天早上我六点钟起床了。，把我的奴女(奴, ce caractère signifie l'esclave, donc attention !)朋友的儿子叫醒以后，我淋浴洗澡了。 在坐公共汽车去上班以前(在...以前 signifie avant quelque chose, c'est une locution fixée ! )，我吃过早饭后了。，我的工作的前边，有很有意思的一家很有意思的咖啡店 (donc l'ordre d'une phrase chinoise  : la clé + l'adjectif + le nom)。，在那儿我跟我的同事一起喝咖啡。
(Today I woke up at 6。after having waken up my girlfriend's son, I took a shower. Before taking the bus to work, I ate breakfast. My work is located in front of an interesting coffee shop. There, I drank coffee along with my teammates).

。。。对不对？：）

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我的白天早晨 （Here use 早晨 is more formal in writing)

今天早上我六点钟起床了。把我的奴好朋友的儿子叫醒以后，我去淋浴了。坐公共汽车去上班以前，我吃了早饭了。我的工作的地方前边，有一家很有意思的一家咖啡店。，在那儿我跟我的同事一起喝咖啡。
(Today I woke up at 6。after having waken up my girlfriend's son, I took a shower. Before taking the bus to work, I ate breakfast. My work is located in front of an interesting coffee shop. There, I drank coffee along with my teammates).

。。。对不对？：）

Good work, keep up!

我的白天

今天早上我六点钟起床了。

把我的奴【女nv】朋友【girlfriend 女朋友】【in Chinese "奴nu"→“奴隶” means"slave"】的儿子叫醒以后，我淋浴了。

坐公共汽车去上班以前，我吃早饭了。

我的工作的（地方）前边，有（一家）很有意思的一家咖啡店。在那儿我跟我的同事一起喝咖啡。

(Today I woke up at 6。after having waken up my girlfriend's son, I took a shower. Before taking the bus to work, I ate breakfast. My work is located in front of an interesting coffee shop. There, I drank coffee along with my teammates).

well done：D

我的白天

今天早上我六点钟起床。把我女朋友的儿子叫醒以后，我洗了个澡。 我吃了早饭然后坐公共汽车去上班。在我工作的地方的前面，有家很有意思的咖啡店。在那儿我跟我的同事一起喝了杯咖啡。
(Today I woke up at 6。after having waken up my girlfriend's son, I took a shower. Before taking the bus to work, I ate breakfast. My work is located in front of an interesting coffee shop. There, I drank coffee along with my teammates).

。。。对不对？：）