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- Medical advancement Medical advancement Medical advancement is a very actual important for nowadays, because technologies are always develops and there’re creating new ways to improve human’s body and fight different diseases. Every day new methods of influence on organism appear. And some people say that medical advancement had allowed the human race to advance, but others believe it’s a perversion of nature. However, both are right and medical advancement has advantages and disadvantages. But where is this line between saving people’s lives and scary influence? On the one hand, Medicine must always be improved, because it’s necessary for our health. If medicine wasn’t developed as well as now, we would have a worse quality of life. And this is a fact. Furthermore, regular medical advancement gives us a confidence in next day, because today we can easily cure many illnesses which were considered as fatal few decades ago. For example, only 30 years ago about every tenth died of simple flu. Despite some accidents new technologies in medicine have saved millions of lives. If medicine hadn’t started develop so quickly, we would be afraid of many diseases. On the other hand, if we look on lives of people who fought scary diseases or lived a long life due to different medicines, we can see that lives most of them are not as sugar as it seems. Many of them are addicted of medicines and pills, some of them continue their lives in constant pains, preferring death than such style of life. Another point is that people becomes more and more addicted of medicines, every second person usually taking some pills. Because of this affection on our health, were created a many other illnesses. Many experts think that our organism can fight absolutely every disease, but with all advancement in medicine it slowly forgot this ability. All in all, medical advancement becomes necessary in our time, because it’s really supporting millions lives. However, in my opinion, we can live without it.February 24, 201500
Я ищу новую работу
Представьте себе, что Вы сидите на работе, отвечаете на телефонные звонки, пишете емейлы, делаете таблички в экселе и т.д., и в то же самое время, Вы получаете на свой мобильный телефон, в приложении «whatsapp» фотографии и короткие видео от Вашей подруги, которая на природе катается на коньках, бегает на лыжах или в какой-то школе рисует красивые картины. Ее видео веселые - ведь в них моя подруга исполняет главную роль, и на фотографиях она всегда улыбается.
Как я хочу делать все это вместе с ней! Я думаю о том, как хорошо было бы работать с перерывами. Я начала бы в девять часов утра, после игры в бадминтон или после плавания в бассейне, поработала бы немножко. Потом, я вышла бы на свежий воздух покататься на лыжах или на коньках. После этого, я поела бы, немножко отдохнула и после короткого сна поработала один-два часа. И все.
Я знаю, что у подруги бывает много работы по вечерам и в выходные дни – такого я не хочу. Мне нужна работа на 3-4 часа, которая хорошо оплачивается. Вы поможете мне ее найти? Спасибо Вам заранее.Ваша главная ошибка в запятых, но это уже очень продвинутый русский, а как для иностранки вы составили очень грамотный и красивый текст.
0 votedFebruary 9, 20151- “the intouchables” Review “The Intouchables” Review The Intouchables is a 2011 French comedy-drama film based on a true story directed by Olivier Nakache and Éric Toledano. It stars François Cluzet and Omar Sy. The film has received several award nominations. Philippe is a quadriplegic. Confined to a wheelchair and unable to feel anything below his neck, he is remarkably good natured about his situation. He's rich enough to be able to afford a care, with the aid of a secretary, a nurse, and a caretaker. He lives a reasonably productive life. One day he was forced to find a new caretaker, he interviews all the usual candidates and one who really impressed him. That would be Driss, a "street person" from ghetto with criminal past. Philippe is impressed by Driss' unconventional approach to the interview and offers him for the job. Through the films, those two absolutely different characters try to get used to themselves. Although, there’re a lot of hilarious moments when the simple life from streets contrast with the sophisticated lifestyle of higher society. In the end of this unusual story Driss recognizes that they can’t be together anymore in some reasons, he makes Philippe’s life as amazing as he could, after that he quietly leaves it. From start to finish, The Intouchables is about the development of an unlikely relationship between two very different individuals. For what it is, it's hard to find something better. This film teaches a lot of life lessons, such as laughing on every problem you faces. Furthermore, it deals with very important problems like real and unbreakable friendship despite enormous differences and that no matter who you are, old or young, rich or poor, you will never be too different to be yourself. It’s a very strong and heartwarming film with many inspirational moments which makes you to look on life from other side. However, every film finds his critics, this one is not an exception, but it’s too unimportant to make the film worse. All in all, The Intouchables taught me a lot of important lessons and changed my view on many things in life. In my opinion, this film must be watched my every person who is clever enough to think about something which is really significant.February 9, 201500
- Alcohol should be illegal Alcohol should be illegal Drinking alcohol is like taking a drug. It is a form of drug abuse, and drug addiction. This is a worldwide problem that many people are involved in. There are good effects of alcohol in moderation and a very big developed industry. On the other hand there are bad effects on your health and a lot of global problems connected with it. Lately scientists have been saying that a little bit of alcohol with dinner is not only okay but it is also good for you. They say that if you drink a small amount of alcohol it will help you sleep. Also if you drink a moderate amount every day it can help your health in the long run. This can help protect your heart against disease that causes heart attacks and make risk of developing diabetes lower. It’s also a refined and necessary part of intelligent parties, because some alcohol like vine or champagne is considered like a gentle drink. It’s like another rate of your intelligence. Furthermore, one of the biggest advantages of this liquid is that is very profitable industry and plays its role in the world economy. It gets more than 185 billion dollars per year, which is enormous profit. On the other hand, there are a lot of diseases, addictions and deaths in case of alcohol. Drinking lots of alcohol will damage your organs, like the brain, liver, stomach, intestines, and heart. Alcohol takes a millions life every year, without people whose becomes poor, addicted or alcoholics. About 60 million people are addicted for alcohol every year and this statistic increase every year. For instance, it’s the main reason of deaths on the roads. In conclusion alcohol can affect your life in a good or bad way depends on you. A lot of people think that alcohol breaks people’s lives, but it’s not an alcohol. People break their lives by themselves. And in my opinion it’s silly to make an alcohol illegal, because its harm depends on humans.January 26, 201510
It's depend on preferences, all countries are good in something. If you want to see a wonderful nature and learn rich history you schould go to Europe. If you want to rest on beach you should go to UAE or Turkye or anywhere like this. And etc. However I'll start my trip around the wolrd from Europe.
0 votedJanuary 20, 20150- Application Letter Dear Mr.Grayson, I will be a very proud, if I stay a part of your university society. The California University of Cinematic Arts is my dream since I was 10. I studied all materials and projects of your university and was very excited for your role in a world cinema. You can’t even imagine my happiness when I passed the first exam. Now I need to introduce myself. In this year I’ll finish a Hollywood Arts High School, as a best student. I had a very big passion to study art. My favorite kinds of arts are cinema, theatre and music. I’m going to stay a film director. My idol is Til Schweiger, he is awesome all his films are amazing. I have many achievements: I’m a captain of School basketball team, I’m a winner of City Scientific Projects Contest, I’m a winner of International Geography Olympiad, I’m a winner of State Singers contest and a director of school plays. Let me know if this is of interest. Your sincerely, Nicholas Blanch. (Everything here isn't true.)January 20, 201500
русский руские (Plural form) статьи
Привет, я -(you don't need to put a dash here) Хань.Я изучаю русский язык. Это интересный язык, мне очень нравится, но очень трудно, я не произношу. (it's correct but it will be more suitable to say " но мне очень трудно произность" - " But it's too hard to pronounce").
есть первый русский боярышник песни очень хорошо, дерево. (This sentence is uncorrect, but here's one possible version) Есть одна очень хорошая песня, про русское дерево, боярышник.
0 votedJanuary 20, 20151NoNin Genitive Case exercise
У него есть паспорт? — Нет, у него нет паспорта.
У неё есть телефон? — Нет, у неё нет телефона.
У нас есть кризис? — Нет, у нас нет кризиса.
У них есть проблема? — Нет, у них нет проблемы.
У тебя есть время? — Извини, у меня нет времени.
У неё есть чай? — Нет, у неё нет чая.
У тебя есть книга? — У меня нет книгы книги, него есть.
У него есть подруга? — Нет, у него нет подругы подруги
У них есть директор? — Сейчас у них нет директора.
I can't figure out which one, or ones, I got wrong.We haven't exact rule for this situation, I should to know it
0 votedJanuary 20, 20151- Description of a country Our world is full of amazing countries and I want to visit all of them, but here are some countries which are my favorites. And one of them is Switzerland. Swiss Confederation is a highly developed country in the middle Europe which considerate of 26 cantons. Mostly of Swiss territory is flooded by mountains, so population is not very big, about 8 million people. The big difference between Switzerland and other countries is that Switzerland is neutrality country and never takes a part in world problems and cases. Also it's one of the most stable countries. By itself country is divided on four big national groups: German, French, Italian and Romansh. There are also four official languages: German, French, Italian and Romansh. So, population is very varied. But at all Swiss are very intelligent, good-mannered, kind and hospitable. They're doesn't like a politic and all what connected with it. But in case of their intelligence they’re really into since and art. Also they are very tolerant for each other, for example, if you would like to buy a house, you have to ask all you future neighbors for an acceptation. Summary, Switzerland is an amazing country which has touched my soul with its unbelievable nature, amazing sights and kind people.January 18, 201510
