我不喜欢的交通工具

我在英国旅游，我不喜欢自己开车。，因为我觉得比较很贵的事情。每次考驾驶证的价格一次就是一百英镑(WTH!)。所以，有拿到驾驶证以前之前就已经很贵要花很多钱。我也觉得开车运行成本也比较很贵，包括比如买车价格，买保险，修理价格什么的。
在中国我不喜欢骑自行车，因为我觉很危险。在大城市有挤地经常堵车，所以比较危险。不过，在中国买自行车比较便宜，还有运行成本比较低。因此，骑自行车有各种利益许多好处。

10多年= (10 + more) years 10年多= 10 years + more (years or moths or etc)

记得, mission complete

Blog Post #2 【请你帮我的中文翻译啊】

To my best friend,

My mind is rushing with energy right now.

I am having so many thoughts, plans, theories, and predictions about my future. I see so many pictures scattered all over my eyes. What is happening to...my vision. It is changing. The air around me...I can feel it...I can touch it. The taste. It feels light and crisp. What is happening to me?

This energy. This mindset. It feels so eerie yet so empowering. I can feel it.

I want do something grand.
I want to do something magnificent.
I feel this is the time to do it.

Do you feel it?
The wind of change.

Sincerely,
Brandon Hok

ps:

The world is waiting for you.
Lets join together and see the world.

wechat: brandonblog

译文如下：
致我最好的朋友，
此时此刻我的思绪飞扬。
我现在有很多关于未来的想法、计划、理论和幻想。 我的眼前出现很多散乱的画面，我的眼睛怎么了？
我的视力正在改变。空气围绕着我，我可以感受到，却触摸不到。???
这味道是清爽的。 这种能量，这种心态，让我觉得奇怪却又鼓舞着我。
我可以感觉到。

我想做一些伟大的事。
我想做一些了不起的事。
我觉得是时候 开始了。

你们感受到了吗？
风向变了

诚恳地，
何博栋

Ps：
世界正在等着你
让我们一起加入观看世界吧

I hate when people over revise it, typically about poem-like articles cuz it might change the meaning. Your article is grammatically correct and deep in thought. The only thing that confused me is the part, "I can touch it = 却触摸不到", which I don't understand. Should it be the opposite? Also for the Sincerely at the end of the letter, 诚挚的 is the direct translation but not a usual ending in Chinese. You might you 此致, 敬礼 (please check the format of this one if you use since it must be written in a specific format) for very formal letters, or you can simply finish the letter with your name. 

信件: typically refers to paper mail since 信 means letter and 件stands for a real "set" or "unit" (includes envelope, stamp, blahblahblah). So if a delivery guy knocks your door and says, "有您的信件", and you will know it's a small envelope, maybe a letter from friend or your bill. 邮件: is rather a broader concept that includes all kinds of mail and postal. So it also includes 信件 in many circumstances. If I receive a notice from FedEx, telling me that "您有邮件，请查收", I will guess that it must be either the iWatch I bought on eBay or maybe a letter (信件). One more thing to be careful with: THE EMAIL. As a new function (well, not that new actually), email is categorized in 邮件 in specific. I don't know why but you might have found words like 垃圾邮件, 您有新邮件 notice, and such. But since emails are basically text letter, people will say “我上gmail查查信 (Imma check my mail on gmail)”. I barely heard people using 信"件" when they mentioned email since it‘s not a 件 as there's no envelope or stamp. So, just for you information :)