can you help me correct this paragraph please ?aa

I think mental health is a serious problem that many people are facing it nowadays. In general, when we talk about health we just only think about body physical health rather than mental health. At the beginning of the 21st century, many famous actors committed suicide because of mental illness. That made many people start to pay more attention to mental health. Depression, bipolar manic disorder and autism are our common mental illnesses. Many people have misunderstandings about depression, and these misunderstandings will aggravate a patient's condition. As a person who has experienced depression before, I think this is a terrible disease. It deprived me of my good moods. I couldn’t have a normal life because of it . It’s not as simple to get out of this as many people think. They think you should just try to do happy things and you will get better. In fact it needs a long-term, stable treatment and medication, rather than just words of encouragement.

I hope everybody will pay more attention to their mental health, and try to understand the psychology behind it. All of us will have a hard time someday or another. I hope everyone can come out of it .

Now, I’m working with a team making an animated movie. This movie tells a story about a child with autism. There are three people in our team: a Chinese girl , a  Russian guy and me. We will have one semester to finish this movie. In the beginning of the formation of the team, we had some difficulties in communication. Every Tuesday, the three of us sit together trying to express our views to each other. Because of language barriers, we often need to act out own ideas, which is very interesting.
After a run-in period of with this team, I learned a lot of things, such as: when we were a team with only two people, neither of us was satisfied with the other's ideas, but after we became three, our ideas tended to move in the same diection. (Also the trend of the story not really sure what you want to say here) Men and women have different perspectives, and our personalities will decide the story. However, no matter what differences there are between us in our way of thinking, we respect each other . I think this is because we want to do this story. This aim will make us be a good team.

This is a great piece of writing.  I have just made some changes so that it reads more naturally in English. Good luck with the movie! ????

Introducing My Self

Hello, I am Caleb. I was born in Taiwan. I have two brothers. In my childhood I liked to go out on my bicycle, when I had finished my homework.
I studied in my hometown until I had graduated from senior high school. I majored in science education at Taipei University of Education. I got my master’s degree at the same university, where I specialised in gifted education, especially in science.
In Taiwan I was a primary school teacher. I taught science and computing, and also was an internet technique worker in school.
I have a daughter and son. We usually go away during the holidays. I really like cycling. I completed the “Two northern one day”, a circular route via two northern cross-island highways over 200 km. I hope I can discover the UK by bike.