24 hours per day is not enough

I want to do many things.
I like spending time with my girlfriend, friends and my family. It make me so happy. Every week we spend a lot of time together. Specially, especially on Monday nights and on weekends. We go out to a park or to the movie theater or we just we share good life experiences in some the house and we enjoy a wonderful meal. But always we like to be together.
My work absorbs a lot of my time; fortunately I work with my best friend (he is like a brother to for me; we attend to the same church) .
I like to read books, I like playing the piano, I like go to the water park, I love going to the movie theater, watching TV , listening to music, visiting my friends, traveling, know new people, meeting new friends, and I like learning new languages and cultures a lot, and teaching Spanish. But that those are many things to do and the time is not enough for me. I need to choose set my priority and sacrifice some things to do the most important .

 

<em>Really good job! Just some small corrections.</em>

I don't see any difference in what you wrote. Perhaps you made a mistake?

Waiting on a sunny day.

It's rainning... I love this song and it cheers me up me (thanks, Barbara). I like all kinds of music. That's not true, I think so, it's lie, as I don't like tecno and house. What's more , I don't like 'reggeton'. I enjoy listening,  to jazz, blues and rock . It depends on my mood. There are days when I feel sad and I listen to ballands and when I'm happy gayest  the happiest music but I don't know why. Wouldn't it have to be the other way arround? Today, I'm so happy. I'm listening to  "Twist and Shout." It's a beautiful song for dancing and singing; it's a good way to free yourself, so I continue with my "alternative therapy". COME ON BABY!!!

 

<em>Very nice work, Carol. The corrections are very small. You write well.</em>

exercise for exam

Please correct it
Exercise for exam: I have received a letter from my English-speaking Mary, who writes:
...It was great to hear that you went to Italy during your spring holidays. I have always wanted to visit this wonderful country. Did you enjoy your journey? What places of interest did you visit? What impressed you most of all? Did you like your hotel?
I must write a letter to Mary.

Moscow,
Russia
15th March 2015,

Dear Mary,

Sorry it's been so long since I last wrote, but I've been too busy preaparing for my exams.
This trip was superb. I liked Italy very much. We had a really enjoyable holiday. We have visited many cities, such as Rome, Florence, Milan, Venice, and many sights, as well. I liked Rome most of all. This city is one of the most ancient cities. There we saw the coliseum, Vatican, many differen museums and spectacular fountains. In addition we had a wonderful hotel in the heart of Rome. It was really beautiful and comfortable. I recommend you this hotel named "Vatican green house" to you. You will have the best rest (holiday) there.
What are you going to do during your holidays? Will you spend your summer with your parents? Do you want to go to the country to camp?
Well, I'd better go now as I have to study for my exams. Hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes,
Nastya

 

<em>Nastya, this is excellent. You said your English isn't good, but this is very good. Just a few really small changes. Your friend would have understood you perfectly. --Ed</em>

Page of diary. 15/03/2015

Dear diary,
Today I start to tell you about my day.
This morning I got up at 10 o'clock and I had a breakfast.
For the lunch, arrived my grandparents arrived from Milan. and I was very happy because it was a lot of long time since I didn't see they had seen them. 
In the afternoon I played a hockey match, and I won but I didn't made make a goal.
In the evening, I saw the watched a football match at the on television.
Now, I'm going to bed because tomorrow I will go to school, and I will get up early.

OR:

Now, I'm going to bed because tomorrow I have to get up early and go to school.

Very good! Only small problems. 

Some exercises

About me.

My name is Alexei.
I am 33 years old.
I am from Chebarkul.
I am a developer.
I am a programmer.
My hobby is reading books.

"Have got"
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<em>This is very good. No problems. What is "Have got"? "Have God"?</em>

my first day on this page

Hello everybody,
This is my first day writing in another language, considering that other people can be read and correct my errors.
I wish to learn the English language, and I can teach my Spanish, I am a professional, so then you can trust in me, to teach teaching my native language.
Best regards

 

<em>Good, Jorge. Just some little problems.</em>

I think trek is used for longer trips: A trek through Africa. A trek across the desert. It also is usually a difficult trip, usually in a remote or wild location. A hike can be much shorter, and is always on foot: We are going for a 5-mile hike in the Smoky Mountains. It is not as difficult as a trek. You can hike in a state park near your home, but you wouldn't trek through a state park near home. I hope this helps a bit.