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24 hours per day is not enough I want to do many things. I like spending time with my girlfriend , friends and my family. It make me so happy. Every week we spend a lot of time together. Specially on Monday night and on weekends . we go out to a park or to the movie theater or just we share good life experiences in some house and we enjoy a wonderful meal. But always we like to be together. My work absorb a lot of my time; fortunately I work with my best friend( he is like a brother for me, we attend to the same church) . I like read books, I like playing the piano, I like go to water park, I love going to the movie theater, wacthing TV , listening to music, visiting my friends, traveling, know new people , meeting new friends, and I like learning new languages and cultures a lot, and teaching Spanish . But that are many things to do and the time is not enough for me. I need to choose my priority and sacrifice some things to do the most important .

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24 hours per day is not enough

I want to do many things.
I like spending time with my girlfriend, friends and my family. It make me so happy. Every week we spend a lot of time together. Specially, especially on Monday nights and on weekends. We go out to a park or to the movie theater or we just we share good life experiences in some the house and we enjoy a wonderful meal. But always we like to be together.
My work absorbs a lot of my time; fortunately I work with my best friend (he is like a brother to for me; we attend to the same church) .
I like to read books, I like playing the piano, I like go to the water park, I love going to the movie theater, watching TV , listening to music, visiting my friends, traveling, know new people, meeting new friends, and I like learning new languages and cultures a lot, and teaching Spanish. But that those are many things to do and the time is not enough for me. I need to choose set my priority and sacrifice some things to do the most important .

 

Really good job! Just some small corrections.

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