Testing my writing skills

Hello, everyone, this is my first text in on italki. I discovered this tool website today and I loved it because before, I didn't couldn't find any other tool where I could have my texts corrected for by native speakers. I'm really excited about improving my english through this social media website. My plan is improving to improve my writing because I believe that this by improving it I will also improve my vocabulary and fluency in english. Actually, I think that I have I'm at a good level in english but I have to improve my knowledge about of it for jobs issues my job.

So okay, thank you for your time and the corrections, rs

Regards!

My last gig

In this text, I'm going to talk about my last gig and what it felt like. First, let me introduce myself and briefly explain what I do. I'm Matias, a 19-year-old musician who decided to leave his band in 2014 in order to pursue a solo career. During 2014, I wrote more than 20 songs; some of them made it onto the 3 EPs I edited that year, and some haven't been released yet. The last gig I played was special because it was the first gig on which my new songs were performed live. In order to make the gig more intimate, I decided to give an acoustic show with me on the vocals, acoustic guitar, and piano; and my friend, Juan on electric guitar. For the gig, I chose nine of my favorite songs and rehearsed with my friend Juan for three weeks. The gig took place on Friday, March 13th in Mar del Plata, Argentina, the city where I was born, in a pub called Piano Bar. We got to the venue at 7.30pm to set up everything. Juan and I set up our instruments, and another friend, Federico, took care of the live sound and multitrack recording. At 9.00pm, the opening act started and by 9.40 it was already finished. The anxiety was at its peak, and we couldn't wait any longer to get on stage and give it our best. Even though we were anxious, we weren't nervous at all because we felt confident as we had rehearsed for so long. Finally, at 10.00pm, we took the stage. If any of you have ever played live, you'll know how time flies when you're on stage. The setlist felt well balanced, the live audio was nice and clean and our performances were at their best. I enjoyed every single song we played, but at the same time I tried to focus on the songs in order to not make mistakes. Our show lasted 40 minutes, and at the end people asked for an encore. I decided to sit on the piano and play them a new unreleased track. That moment felt very intimate because it was just me singing and playing while alsp trying to connect with the audience. When I finished, Juan came back to the stage and we thanked everybody for their support. I'm posting a photo of that precise moment, when I was sitting at the piano and singing this new song. After that, we picked up our instruments and cables and went home with a huge smile in our faces. Thank you for reading, and I look forward to your corrections. Thanks!

PS: In case you want to give it a listen to my music, go on http://mattias.bandcamp.com/music and check my EPs. Thank you again!

I'm trying to craft a poem

Hi! This is my first note! I'm excited
I'm an exchange student so I'm in the U.S.
I'm taking a Crafting of poetry class and I have to submit my revision poem.
Crafting poetry is hard and it is harder when I try to make an English poem. This is 
because my words are restricted. But I have to craft cuz it is my homework. lol

I like the moon.
Everyday I'm checking how the moon looks.
This habit comes from when I lived in Seoul.
Seoul is beautiful city but it is hard to see many stars. So I usually see the moon.

My poem is about the moon. and I have to revise it but I have no idea how to. 
If you want comment on it plz do that. Thanks!

Wondering

I don’t know what color you are 
Is it true that you are yellow?
Why are you are not white or silver or gray

I don’t know what your role is
Why you stay there for a whole night and day
I’m not sure whether you’re staying or you’re running

Even when I was in a moving car, I saw you.
You were just there what place you were
I remember the moment I saw you.
I was in a moving car on a dark country highway
My dad was driving and both my mom and brother were sleeping
and I stretched my neck , stuck on the car window, and saw you.

I don’t know why you’re so shy
It will be fine though I see your back
I’ll be there.

Just the same as you.

Another accident. – 2015 02 05

I feel really bad after reading about the latest air crash in Taiwan. Over 30 people have died so far.
Many people will lose their family members or friends forever.
According to some research, the safest mode of transportation is by plane. I wonder whether it is true.
We have heard about too many accidents in 2014. When there is air crash, lots of people die.
Isn’t train safer?

Great job!

Las ventajas y las desventajas de vivir en el campo

Yo he vivido en los suburbidos de una ciudad muy grande, y ahora, yo vivo en el campo. Eso me causaba ampliar mi mente sobre muchas cosas y por eso estoy agradecida, sin embargo, después de muchos años he noticiado algunas ventajas y algunas desventajas de vida en un campo.

La primera ventaja de vivir en el campo es que se realiza la belleza de la tierra. Cuando se vive cerca de una ciudad esta belleza a menudo se es olividado. Esto es lástima porque la conexión con la naturaleza es importante para relajarse y sentirse tranquilo. La segunda ventaja de vivir en el campo es vida se vuelve más simple. Las personas en el campo no son preocupados sobre cosas materiales que al fin no son importantes.

La primera desventaja de vivir en el campo es que no hay nada actividades ocuparse. Esto es especialmente el cierto durante el invierno cuando la nieve impide a una persona a salir de su casa. La segunda desventaja de vivir en el campo es que la mayoría de la gente tiene una mente cerrada. Las personas no les gustan las personas y las cosas que son diferentes y les asustan.