I'm trying to craft a poem.

Hi! This is my first note! I'm excited.
I'm an exchange student so I'm in the U.S.
I'm taking a class called Crafting of Poetry and I have to submit my revised poem.
Crafting poetry is hard and it is harder when I try to write an English poem because my vocabulary is restricted. But I have to write because it is my homework. LOL 

I like the moon.
Everyday I check what the moon looks like.
This habit comes from when I lived in Seoul.
Seoul is a beautiful city but it is hard to see many stars. So I usually see the moon.

My poem is about the moon and I have to revise it but I have no ideas.
If you want comment on it please do that. Thanks!

Wondering

I don’t know what color you are. 
Is it true you are yellow?
Why you are not white or silver or gray? 

I don’t know what your role is; 
Why you stay there a whole night, and day. 
I’m not sure whether you’re staying or you’re running. 

Even when I was riding in a car, I saw you.
You just stayed in the same place.  
I remember the moment I saw you.
I was in a car on the dark country highway. 
My dad was driving and both my mom and brother were sleeping
and I stretched out my neck, stuck it out the car window, and saw you.

I don’t know why you’re so shy. 
It will be fine though I see your back. 
I’ll be there.

Just the same as you.

I'm trying to craft a poem

Hi! This is my first note! I'm excited
I'm an exchange student so I'm in the U.S.
I'm taking a Crafting of poetry class and I have to submit my revision poem.
Crafting poetry is hard and it is harder when I try to make an English poem. This is 
because my words are restricted. But I have to craft cuz it is my homework. lol

I like the moon.
Everyday I'm checking how the moon looks.
This habit comes from when I lived in Seoul.
Seoul is beautiful city but it is hard to see many stars. So I usually see the moon.

My poem is about the moon. and I have to revise it but I have no idea how to. 
If you want comment on it plz do that. Thanks!

Wondering

I don’t know what color you are 
Is it true that you are yellow?
Why are you are not white or silver or gray

I don’t know what your role is
Why you stay there for a whole night and day
I’m not sure whether you’re staying or you’re running

Even when I was in a moving car, I saw you.
You were just there what place you were
I remember the moment I saw you.
I was in a moving car on a dark country highway
My dad was driving and both my mom and brother were sleeping
and I stretched my neck , stuck on the car window, and saw you.

I don’t know why you’re so shy
It will be fine though I see your back
I’ll be there.

Just the same as you.

I'm trying to write a poem

Hi! This is my first post! I'm excited
I'm an exchange student so I'm in the U.S.
I'm taking Poetry writing class and I have to submit my revised poem.
Writing poetry is hard and it is harder when I try to make an English poem.
Because my vocabulary is restricted. But I have to write cuz it is my homework. lol

I like the moon.
I check everyday what the moon looks like.
This habit comes from when I lived in Seoul.
Seoul is a beautiful city but it is hard to see many stars. So I usually see the moon.

My poem is about the moon. And I have to revise it but I have no idea.
If you want comment on it plz do that. Thanks!

Wondering

I don’t know what color is yours
Is it true you are yellow?
Why are you not white or silver or gray

I don’t know what your role is
Why you stay there a whole night, and day
I’m not sure whether you’re staying or you’re running

Even when I was in a moving car, I saw you.
You were just there in that place
I remember the moment I saw you.
I was in a moving car on the dark country highway
My dad was driving and both my mom and brother were sleeping
and I stretched my neck , pressed against the car window, and saw you.

I don’t know why you’re so shy
It will be fine though I see your back
I’ll be there.

Just the same as you.