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    Answering an informal letter

    Dear Marion,

    It was great to hear from you! Well done with on your exam; I was sure you would get it. My parents didn’t give me any money when I passed mine; you’re a really lucky girl!

    You say said you can’t decide if whether to buy a computer game or some clothes. I know you really like computer games and a new racing game is about to be launched released, but keep in mind we have the school party next month. … so I think you should buy some new clothes for the party. 

    If I were you, I would buy a designer outfit. There’s a new shop in the city with lots of wonderful dresses. Have you heard about it? One of The Chanel dress is absolutely lovely! Also, it’s bright and red, just your favourite colour. color.

    Do Drop me a line if you have time and tell me what you finally decide.

    Love,

    C.

     

    This is very well written. You do a great job of engaging with your reader, showing her that you know her well and that you want what's best for her. You also do a good job of sounded educated and informal at the same time. Very well done. I made a couple of changes to enhance the letter. 

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    November 24, 2014
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    Today

    I want to try to improve my English by in any way. I searched for learning English websites on the Internet. Finally, I find found out about this website which is famous for studying English and connecting foreigners. I started to learn English by written writing this paragraph. I expect hope to get your ideas and become a friend.

     

    This is a very good start. The biggest thing you could work on is present and past tense. For instance, when you are telling us you "searched for" something earlier in the day, you must add an 'ed' to the end of the word 'search' to make it past tense. The same applies to 'start.' The is a tough concept to master, but keep working on it and you'll get it! great job!

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    November 20, 2014
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    winter at Montreal.

    this morning it was very cold outside. i had difficult to It was difficult walking on the sidewalk because of the snow become ice icy. and scary to I was scared I would slip.
    i don't have idea how come know why the worker of the city city workers could't don't put the salt down to make the so that the snow no does not became ice. i hope tomorrow will be good the better weather.

     

    It's very cold where I live too! I feel your pain. Many of your sentences are very close to being correct. I just made a few modifications to improve clarity. Good job

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    November 20, 2014
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    Sunday in the afternoon

    The this Sunday, I went with my family to the cinema movies. We watched the movie "Carta al niño Dios." it's It was good. We ate pop corns popcorn, sandwiches, and soda. It's a Colombian movie, Ruben his son Rubencito, ex- wife Mireya, her boyfriend Renzo, and his best friend the priest Raul. it's a comedy. us We liked the movie.

    please, correct me. Thanks

     

    There was one line where you mention Ruben, his son, his ex-wife, ect. but i wasn't sure who they were. Were they actors in the show? Other than that, I fixed some minor mistakes, but overall, good job. 

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    November 20, 2014
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    I have caught a cold

    The only thing that I don't like about autumn is that someone could easily catch a cold or even the flu, including me. I have come down with a cold, and I feel terrible. Although I am not really poorly sick, but my nose is bunged plugged up, and I cannot breath normally through it. I also feel ache achy. I don't suffer from a sore throat and cough though. I guess I need a to rest. and I hope the cold will go away so that I will feel better I wish to get over it soon.

     

     

    I'm sorry you're feeling sick! Great job describing your symptoms. I made a few changes to help the paragraph flow a little easier, but all in all, great job! Hope this helps. 

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    November 19, 2014
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    November 19, 2014
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