I have caught a cold
The only thing that I don't like about autumn is someone could easily catch a cold or even flu, including me. I have come down with cold and I feel terrible. Although I am not really poorly but my nose is bunged up, I cannot breath normally through it, and I feel ache. I don't suffer from sore throat and cough though. I guess I need a rest and I hope the cold will go away and I wish to get over it soon.
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I have caught a cold
The only thing that I don't like about autumn is that someone could easily catch a cold or even the flu, including me. I have come down with a cold, and I feel terrible. Although I am not really poorly sick, but my nose is bunged plugged up, and I cannot breath normally through it. I also feel ache achy. I don't suffer from a sore throat and cough though. I guess I need a to rest. and I hope the cold will go away so that I will feel better I wish to get over it soon.
I'm sorry you're feeling sick! Great job describing your symptoms. I made a few changes to help the paragraph flow a little easier, but all in all, great job! Hope this helps.
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