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Hello, My name is Margaret and I just finished reading Fluent in 3 months. I have been trying to teach myself Spanish for a few years now, and I realize my methods are all wrong. I need to interact with native speakers. Recognizing that our society is becoming more global, I think it's important to be able to communicate with as many people as possible and I don't want language to be a barrier. I'm looking forward to finding a teacher who can help me with my goals.
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    Deciding on a title

    I'm writing a paper on how to promote health in the workplace and I have some trouble with the title and wondered if a native English speaker could take a look. Here is the title I've come up with:

    Promoting Health at Work through PERMA.

    Any thoughts and suggestions are greatly appreciated. This title just doesn't feel right, but I can't put my finger on what's wrong with it.

     

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    Hi, I'm adjusting my message so it's clearer. The spacing was lost in the previous verson.

    Margaret Smith From United States Languages: English, Spanish
    Learning: Spanish

     Hello, I think your title is fine as it is. If you want to make it a little shorter, you can just keep the key words and drop "at" and "through". A few suggestions are below: Promoting Healthy Work Settings......PERMA: Promoting Health at Work...... Health and Work- PERMA Approach Also, try browsing Google Scholar for ideas. Good luck with your paper.

     

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    my work

    I don't have enough time to learn English. However I try to use every free minute.

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