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I also think it sounds fine as you wrote it. A few other options:
Promoting a Healthy Workplace Through PERMA
Promoting a Healthy Workplace With PERMA
Promoting Wellness at Work Through PERMA.
Deciding on a title
I'm writing a paper on how to promote health in the workplace and I have some trouble with the title and wondered if a native English speaker could take a look. Here is the title I've come up with:
Promoting Health at Work through PERMA.
Any thoughts and suggestions are greatly appreciated. This title just doesn't feel right, but I can't put my finger on what's wrong with it.
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Hi, I'm adjusting my message so it's clearer. The spacing was lost in the previous verson.
Margaret Smith From United States Languages: English, Spanish
Learning: Spanish
Hello, I think your title is fine as it is. If you want to make it a little shorter, you can just keep the key words and drop "at" and "through". A few suggestions are below: Promoting Healthy Work Settings......PERMA: Promoting Health at Work...... Health and Work- PERMA Approach Also, try browsing Google Scholar for ideas. Good luck with your paper.
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