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    October 28, 2014
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    favorite documentary movie “Bill Cunningham new york” is a documentary film that record Bill Cunningham’s daily life. Who is Bill Cunningham? If you see a stranger elderly people, wearing a blue jacket, carrying a camera and staring at you with childish smile, Congratulation! you must encounter Bill Cunningham, the man owns a unique column “On the street”. In the documentary movie, Vogue editor Anna Wintour maintains that We all get dressed for Bill. Before the fashion show and Before the prevalence of street snap, there was bill Cunningham, the man dropped out from Harvard and insisted in photographing interesting people who wear nice clothes. I guess Bill maybe the poorest prestigious photographer since Bill never charge for his pictures. Bill has his own philosophy. He points out that If you don’t take money, they cannot tell you what to do. In the movie, Bill happily said that money is the cheapest thing.Liberty and freedom is the most expensive. Living in a small apartment over 60 years, Bill devotes to snapping the great, the good and the stylish by cycling around new york city. In the movie, I saw a man who loves his job, which is beyond a job, more like the career that bill has real passion. This movie enlightened me that besides pursuing high salaries, distinguished frame and outstanding status , human beings are supposed to find a working territory that the person really has passion. Moreover, it is important to figure out,deeply in your heart, what are you truly desired for. Just like Bill said in the movie, "it's not work, it's pleasure.”
    October 28, 2014
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    and by a sleep to say we end The heartache, and the thousand natural shocks That flesh is heir to. 'Tis a consummation Devoutly to be wished.

    也说我们用睡觉终结心痛和正常的震撼,人们正在继承。 这是个我衷心希望的终结。死亡,睡觉。。。

    倘若睡眠能终结心灵的苦痛和肉体所承受的千百种痛苦,那真是求之不得的事情。 

     

    -- To sleep--perchance to dream: ay, there's the rub, For in that sleep of death what dreams may come When we have shuffled off this mortal coil, Must give us pause."

    睡觉,可能做一个梦。唉,这是个问题,因为我们移步掉离这个紧要的线圈时候,在那个死亡的睡觉中,什么梦要来?我们要小心谨慎。

    睡眠中可能会做梦:哎,问题又来了。当我们摆脱了这尘世,在死之长眠中会有何梦来临? 它令我们踌躇 

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    October 28, 2014
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    Admittedly, there are innumerable old residential buildings existed in city, which possess no historic value and occupied extended space. Replacing these old buildings of modern architectures are beneficial to offer comfortable as well as safe living place for dwellers. Modern buildings adopt much more reasonable architecture structure and equip with sophisticated facilities, such as advanced heating system,central air-conditioner and so on.


    In conclusion, we should protect traditional buildings that have high historical value and represent the city’s history development. Moreover, we are supposed to demolish old buildings that are out of use, especially the dangerous residential old buildings.

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    October 28, 2014
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    preserve historic building or traditional building Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on new buildings than to preserve historic or traditional buildings and homes. Along with city modernization, multitudes of traditional buildings have been demolished, a phenomenon that deserves people’s contemplation. Some people maintain that historic buildings are the symbol of city’s history, they cannot be destroyed for establishing modern skyscrapers. On contrary, other individuals point out that these old buildings, taking up a huge space, contain no value, which are supposed to be removed from the modern city. When dealing with this issue, people ought to comprehensively consider this topic and avoid oversimplification. First of all, historic buildings contain conventional values, which are conducive to attract an ocean of visitors and bring huge economic benefits to the city. Currently, citizens are obsessed with visiting traditional buildings, an vivid approach to reminisce elapsed history. In Beijing, hundreds of thousands people come to witness the magnificent Forbidden City, which used to be the emperor’s living place. Not only does the Forbidden City represent the history of Beijing, but also it has brought great tourist revenues to government. Demolishing traditional building do harm to economic development as well as erase the unique history of city. In addition, traditional buildings serve as the symbol of city, which enable the city to be unique and differentiate from other cities. Temple of Earth,an architecture used for worship ceremony, is the mark of Beijing. Chinese students are invariably required to visit this historic building, in order to learn about the structure of traditional building and comprehend its religious function. Moreover, to research and exploit the color utilization in historic buildings, scholars travel thousands of miles to Temple of Earth and study the color manifested in Temple of Earth. It simply contained four colors, which are red, white, grey and yellow, whereas these four color combined in diverse way to show the principle of royal institutions(皇家建筑?). Therefore, ruining historic buildings make all the cities become same and lost history value in research.
    October 28, 2014
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    Teaching is harder than it was in the past. - 2

    Please help me to revise my TOFEL essay

    Utilizing lots of standards to appraise teachers, schools require teachers to hold vital research projects, take care of children’s mental health, and use high-tech teaching methods, especially using Powerpoint to give lectures. In the past, teacher only need to consider how to improve the teaching quality, how to use simple examples to let students comprehend the abstract concept and how to arrange the assignments to let students master the knowledge points. While in the present day, teachers have to spend time and energy to make elaborate lecture PPT. Competing to get promotion in university, teachers have to attempt to create a new research topic. All these additional activities enable teachers to spend less time on preparing for class and improving the teaching qualities. Thus, teaching nowadays become difficult, because teachers have to simultaneously take care so many works.

     

    Parents are demanding quite a lot for teachers, a phenomenon that parents require teachers to have some teaching experience and take special care to their children. It is not hard to find that parents usually linger long time in the teachers’ office to inquire their children’s study conditions and ask for special care for their children. Parents always use certain criteria to assess teachers’ teaching quality. For instance, whether this teacher won any rewards from the school teaching competition? whether this teacher taught any students who get into outstanding universities? Whether this teacher have many years teaching experience? All these assessment standards exert pressures on teachers. Therefore, teachers are confronting huge mental pressures nowadays. 

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    October 26, 2014
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    Teaching is harder than it was in the past. - 2 Please help me to revise my TOFEL essay Utilizing lots of standards to appraise teachers, schools require teachers to hold vital research projects, take care of children’s mental health, and use high-tech teaching methods, especially using Powerpoint to give lectures. In the past, teacher only need to consider how to improve the teaching quality, how to use simple examples to let students comprehend the abstract concept and how to arrange the assignments to let students master the knowledge points. While in the present day, teachers have to spend time and energy to make elaborate lecture PPT. Competing to get promotion in university, teachers have to attempt to create a new research topic. All these additional activities enable teachers to spend less time on preparing for class and improving the teaching qualities. Thus, teaching nowadays become difficult, because teachers have to simultaneously take care so many works.
    October 26, 2014
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    Do you agree or disagree Teaching is harder than it was in the past- 1 Who can help me to revise my TOFEL essay? With the advent of information age, people nowadays are exposed to an ocean of knowledge. Nowadays, students have a wide range of choices to study. They can simply open the website and watch famous universities’ open courses to learn professional knowledge. On the other hand, the progressive technologies may pose negative effects on students, for the internet is full of enticements. Personally, I prefer the statement that teaching is harder nowadays than the past. First of all, children are easily distracted by various things. High technology products, such as sophisticated computers, iPads, smartphones, easily grab the attention from children. Recently, multitudes of researches and news reports concentrate on the issue of children overplaying iPad or computer games. Not only do electronic devices exert harm to the children’s health, but also they reduce the time that teenagers spend on study. In China, some teachers forbid students to take smart phones to school, in order to reduce using of smartphones in class. Teachers frequently find that students, facing various temptation in the virtual world, usually communicate with others via wechat, or keep reading the news on Facebook or Twitter. All these behaviors severe affect the study effect. Even in some cases, students use smartphones to cheat on exams. Obviously, up-to-state electronic products make teaching much more difficult, for it distract students from focusing on study.
    October 26, 2014
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    Chinese Intro:

    我十九岁。——> 我今年十九岁 

    我是大学生。——> 我是一名大学生

    我学习汉语和日语。 ——> 我正在学习汉语和日语
     

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    October 24, 2014
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    你在未來想要跟你的生活做什麼?



     

    在未來...我打算成為一名建築師,可是我覺得我還有很多時間決定.

    我未来想成为一名建筑师,我还有很多时间来决定未来的职业。

     

    因為我喜歡學哲學,我希望我的寫作變得更好.

    我很喜欢哲学。我希望提升自己的写作技巧。

     

    我在未來可能不要成為一名建築師,可能要成為只一個設計師.

    未来我可能并不会从事建筑行业,有可能做一名设计师。

     

    可是,這個只是一個生涯的決定.建立一個家最重要的事情, 可是這是最難打算的事情,也是有一些最難的決斷.

    除了考虑我个人的职业生涯,在未来建立一个家庭对于我来说也很重要。但建立一个家庭有更多需要考虑的因素。

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    October 23, 2014
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