Ha sido muy util!

My Day

Today I will go to the mall with my mother and sister. First we will had have dinner in the McDonalds (*at the McDonalds). Then, we will come go to the cinema and we saw see a thriller movie. Finally we will go back come back to home.

** Nice job! **

Aging

The body is a perfect machine. They are born, they grow, and they die. All in a single lifetime. Sometimes we think that life is boring. Well, The life could be buring boring to many people, but the body don't know about that topics the body isn't aware of these things. Eventually the body will die The body die all days, always. 

What happens in to our body, it´s easy. We need energy as like a battery. Life, talk, and write in Italki, All need a battery in our boddy Living, talking and writing on Italki, we need the battery in our body to do these things. That battery recharges every day all days, but it releases some bad things too. Reactive Oxygen Species, say the experts.

Saludos desde México.

** I really like your writing. This is almost like an introspective poem. Very nice work...it makes my notebook entries seem very boring! I tried to correct with your poetic tone in mind. 

"Gone Girl"

I saw the movie "Gone Girl" last night. It's based on Gillian Flynn's novel of the same name. I liked it a lot, and I recommend it (and I would recommend it <-- this sounds a little more fluid although what you said is correct), especially if you like movies about police investigations. If you go see it, I'm sure you will enjoy it!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ym3LB0lOJ0o

***Everything here is correct, but a few things can be rearranged to sound more native. Nice work!

Anything interesting. (Suggested alternate title: "Some interesting things")

Hi, my name is Peter. I am a persistent and self-sufficient person. That, don’t does not mean that I am not open to being teaching taught by others. I like the challenges and everything that involved with learning learning to me. I believe that every day I can learn something new, to for my personal growth.
While scientific research is my passion, I like have some hobbies. I like reading about history, and one of my favorite things to read about has been the global economic developments. For example, I know that after the Industrial Revolution, Switzerland was a nation that was different from others because of their workforce specialization. While, other countries seeking greater trade, Switzerland was specialized in export value-added products.
I love my country and I read different opinion columns to be informed about national events. I know that at this time, the violence is the principal news around the word, and I hope that we soon overcome these incidents.
I have little time to watch TV, however, one or two times in the month I watch a soccer match with a friend, some beers and have a good talk to distract us from everyday life. When I have time, I enjoy helping others to learn Spanish. Finally, my biggest passions are my girlfriend and to eat. In my city, there are many restaurants with different foods. On weekends, my girlfriend and I cook something different or search for interesting restaurants to eat at.

**Great work!**

Jory