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Aging Body is a perfect machine. They born, grow, and die. All in a life. Sometimes we think that life is boring. Well, The life could be buring to many people but the body don't know about that topics. The body die all days, always. What happen in our body, it´s easy, we need energy as a battery. Life, talk, and write in Italki, All need a battery in our boddy. That battery recharge all days, but it release some bad things. Reactive Oxygen Species, say the experts. Saludos desde México.

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Aging

Body is a perfect machine. It borns, grows, and dies. All in a life (what do you mean). Sometimes we think that life is boring. Well,  life could be buring to many people, but the body doesn't know about that topics. The body dies every day.
What happen in our body, it´s easy, we need energy as a battery. Living, to talk, and to write on Italki, All need a battery in our body. That battery recharges all days, but it releases some bad things. Reactive Oxygen Species, say some experts.

Saludos desde México.

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Aging

The body is a perfect machine. They are born, they grow, and they die. All in a single lifetime. Sometimes we think that life is boring. Well, The life could be buring boring to many people, but the body don't know about that topics the body isn't aware of these things. Eventually the body will die The body die all days, always. 

What happens in to our body, it´s easy. We need energy as like a battery. Life, talk, and write in Italki, All need a battery in our boddy Living, talking and writing on Italki, we need the battery in our body to do these things. That battery recharges every day all days, but it releases some bad things too. Reactive Oxygen Species, say the experts.

Saludos desde México.

 

** I really like your writing. This is almost like an introspective poem. Very nice work...it makes my notebook entries seem very boring! I tried to correct with your poetic tone in mind. 

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Aging

The body is a perfect machine. It is born, it grows, and dies.

 

All in a life.????

 

Sometimes we think that life is boring. Well, life could be boring to many people but the body doesn't know about that. The body will die, always.
What happens in our body, it´s easy, we need energy like a battery.

 

Life, talk, and write in Italki,????

 

 We all need a battery in our body. That battery needs to be recharged everyday, but it releases some bad things, like reactive Oxygen Species, according to the experts.

Saludos desde México.

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Thanks Atikah. Sometimes I like write something interesting.
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