I speak spoke with a subscriber

Today, I speak spoke with one of my subscribers and it was very good but I'm still not comfortable to  with speaking english. I fell good feel better in about writing because I can reflect. But I liked speaking with him in french. Is it correct ?

Dans votre texte anglais, tu cherches "gerund". C'est moins de ordinaire en Francais qu en anglais. C'etait aider.

can you correct my text plz

Dear Tess Boutin,

My name is Henry and i'm the pupil student (pupil is technically correct, but that is a less common word for what you are trying to say. Student is better here.) who you will host. I'm 17 years old and I'm very exited to come to New York; it was my dream when I was a child and it is also today also. In my family we there are 4 of us and my little brother Paul is very jealous of my travell. I told him that I will buy him a gift. It's a golden opportunity to go to New yORK York.

.. I saw the picture of your family and you are all beautiful. It will be the first trip travell to the United States of America and I hope that it will be very fun.
My hobbyie is to playing to the guitar, I'm passionate. I would like to bring take it with me when I   will come to at your home. I also like the American literature and I think it will be a good idea to spend time with in your book club Miss Boutin. My favorite sport is the swimming, I feel good when I'm swimming. It's let me to destress and to think about other to anothers things. 

I would like to see the statue of Liberty; it is a very famous statue in France, we will take a picture together ! I would also like to visit Central Park, I knew know of this park thanks to a cartoon ! To visit many museums, and get to know many english American artists.
And the must most important thing who i have to do is to improve my level in the English language, one of my dreams would be to speak English like a native speaker english!
I hope that we will eat the typical food of New york in restaurants to know .
Say hello to all the familly and see you soon!
Yours sincerely
Henry

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Hello, my name is Maylen, i'm 16 year old, live in France.
I learn English for my studies, for progress and eventually travel and talk with persons.
I have bad in conjugation and if someone can help me, i agree ! :)

Hi Maylen: 

Here is another way you could have written this.

Hello, my name is Maylen. I am 16 years old and I live in France.

I am learning English at school for professional advancement, travel and to be able to speak with English speakers.

I have trouble conjugating verbs and I would like it if someone could help me!  :)

Don't worry aobut your ability to conjugate verbs. It will come in time. I have the same struggles in French. Here is my attempt to translate the short text into French sans dictionnaire. 

Bonjour Maylen:

Il y a en autre idee tu pourrais avoir ecrire.

Je apprends anglais pour travailler, voyager et a parle avec loceuters anglais.

C'est tres difficile a conjugats les verbes. Je voudrais si quelque personne pourraions aide moi!

Good luck with your English!

Tina

The last most recent book I've been reading read. 

The last most recent book I've been reading read  is "<em>Other Lives Than Mine</em>" by Emmanuel Carrère, a french author.

The narrator is witnesses of two terrible events during the same year : the tsunami during her summer holidays in Sri Lanka and the death of her his wife's sister's . This beautifull book speaks about the disease, extreme poverty, love and justice. It's a true story, the author is the narrator.

It's the story of a man who is on summer holiday in Sri Lanka. He is staying in a nice hotel with his wife and his children when suddenly a big Tsunami devastesd a part of the island. The hotel where he's staying is intact but he'll be confronted to the result  by the terrible consequences of this terrible event. He related thisese two sad events with a lot of realism and humanity. It's very emotional.

When I've reading this book, I was in Sri Lanka, just in front of the sea. It's a very crazy experience because when I was saw the sea, I was thinking : "the sea is beautiful and it looks quite calm, but it hasve eat claimed so many lifes lives"

I earned  won an iPhone. (the word "earn" implies that you worked for it, to win it in a contest is not to earn it.)

I'm very happy because I earned  won an iPhone in a drawing at of my English school

God! , I've never had any  a cell phone or even a computer of made byApple before, but... It's amazing! It's state of the art technology!

Ok! I agree I'm being dramatic  overstated, but... I don't know... I think just who anyone who has one to will know what I'm trying to say.