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I earned won an iPhone. (the word "earn" implies that you worked for it, to win it in a contest is not to earn it.)
I'm very happy because I earned won an iPhone in a drawing at of my English school
God! , I've never had any a cell phone or even a computer of made byApple before, but... It's amazing! It's state of the art technology!
Ok! I agree I'm being dramatic overstated, but... I don't know... I think just who anyone who has one to will know what I'm trying to say.
I earned won an iPhone.
I'm very happy because I won earned an iPhone in a draw of at my English school
God, I've never had owned a any cell phone or even an Apple computer of Apple before. but... It's amazing! It's state of the art technology!
Ok! I agree I'm being overstated, but,.. I don't know... I think just that whoever has one will to know what I'm trying to say.
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