Could anyone check whether what I wrote here is grammatically correct? Thank you very much :-))))

1. The next exercise is reducing the given relative clauses. 6 students were pointed to go to towards the board and told to write down their answers each time. Then, their answers were checked with the whole class. Only 18 questions were answered and 7 werewas left unsolved as homework for students. At the end of the lesson, she reviewed four main cases wherethat reducing relative clauses are used.
2. He was really creative to brainstorm students’ knowledge about Marie Curie and then elicited what they wanted to know about her. This is a creative and interesting way to give students a reason to read.
3. AfterDuring the observation, I gained valuable experience. First, I learned how to teach a class of relatively low level of proficiency.

A story.

"And now I'm going to explain everything to you. Not that there is too much of it. You know the history of my family. I'm most probably the only one left. I'm a woman so I can't ascend the throne. One would think they will would let me be. But wherever I go someone would try to make an attempt on my life. It's absurd, don't you think?"
"Oh yes," Jane said with feeling that something is being awaited expected of her.
"I spend a lot of time in seclusion where we can take necessary measures but I must take part in some social events. For instance during my stay here I can't miss out some affairs. So I shouldn't during my way back in Paris. In order You to should understand that I possess estates in HungaryMagyar. One can take a fantastic rest there. And I love the relaxation. Also - and I'm not supposed to tell you but I'm going to do it as I like your likeable face - some plans are contrived there [could I say: some plans are being contrived there?]. All in all it's very important for me not to be assassinated."

"So I shouldn't during my way back in Paris." I am not sure what you mean with this sentence, maybe: "So I shouldn't take part (or miss out) in any affairs during my way back in Paris."

"some plans are being contrived there?" would suggest the activity is still ongoing, not yet complete, and so seems to be the better phrase to use. "some plans are contrived there?" would be correct if it was a place where plotting (had) happened previously but was not necessarily still happening at this time. Sorry, we have too many tenses in English!

1Q84 Murakami

Two days ago I've bought 1Q84 by Haruki Murakami, do you like it? Tonight I'd like to start to read it with a glass of wine

<<Good choice of book(s) Mirco>>

introducing myself

I am Mandana. I was born in Isfahan (Iran). I am a doctor but I work in an official job as boss of the office. I have a 18 yrs old daughter. I have been studying English since last year, listening to music, watching films and talking with people are my purpose objectives. It is important for me to take the IELT`S degree too because it is necessary for PhD entrance exams .
I began to learn both English and Turkish at the same time, but I can speak, and read and listen to Turkish very well, it is just in grammatical points that I need to help .

Cheese-cakeCheesecake

When I wanna want to have cheesecake, I go to a coffee shop with my friend.
Yesterday, I was craving for some cheesecake, especially early in the morning.
Actually, I didn't know that it sells is sold at athe mart. :P
In addition, I'm on a diet. KKK (you probably don't want to use KKK in written correspondence as it is generally understood as an abbreviation for an extremely racist and socially unacceptable organisation)
I knew that I shouldn't have bought and known this cheesecake that sell was on sale at the mart.
But I bought and knew it.
I cannot stop eating this. I need to stay away from it. That's because it is of the kind of high in calories.
Awwww... It makes me want to eat it angain and again.

Do you have a driving licensce?

yYes, I have held a driver's licensesce for 20 years, and the first car I bought was when I was 30,. aAt first I used to drive it, just for to the city and nearby villages, now I drive to cities further away from my city, like Seville, Madrid or Lisbon. I must to admit, or I have to recognize, that I don`t like to drive.

Recent daily action

Hello everyone.
After I went to the Philippines, I decided to clean my room and to throw some things into the garbage box (garbage box = 'bin'). The reason why I did it, was I noticed that I need only a few things in my life to spend my life.

Some comics, DVDs, and books I could sell so I sold theseit to a second handused shop.
IsDid my room is more clean than before?
No way...I tooktake up some things out from my closet. so my room is not clean now.

Thank you for reading my text.

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最近の日々

こんにちわ。
フィリピンに行ったあと、自室を綺麗にし、いくつかの所有物を処分することをきめました。私は生活の中で必要なものは少ないことに気づいたために、それを行いました。
幾つかの漫画やDVD、本などを中古品取り扱い店へ売却ました。
私の部屋が以前より綺麗になったかどうかですか？
まさか、クローゼットから不要なものを取り出したので、私の部屋は以前より汚くなっています。

私の文章を読んでくれてありがとう。