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Cheese-cake When I wanna have Cheese-cake, I go to a coffee shop with my friend. Yesterday, I was craving for some Cheese-cake especially early in the morning. Actually, I didn't know that it sells at a mart. :P In addition, I'm on a diet. KKK I shouldn't have bought and known this cheese-cake that sell at the mart. But I bought and knew it. I cannot stop eating this. I need to stay away from it. That's because of the kind of high calorie. Awwww... It makes me eat it angain and again.

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Cheesecake

When I wanna have Cheesecake, I go to a coffee shop with my friend.
Yesterday, I was craving some Cheesecake, especially early in the morning.
I didn't know it was sold at a convenience store.
I should also mention, I'm on a diet. KKK :)
I shouldn't have bought the cheesecake from the convenience store (Quick Mart), but I did, and immediately knew:
I cannot stop eating this. I need to stay away from it because of the high calorie content.
Awwww... It makes me eat it angain and again.

 

LOL, nice job!

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Cheese-cakeCheesecake

When I wanna want to have cheesecake, I go to a coffee shop with my friend.
Yesterday, I was craving for some cheesecake, especially early in the morning.
Actually, I didn't know that it sells is sold at athe mart. :P
In addition, I'm on a diet. KKK (you probably don't want to use KKK in written correspondence as it is generally understood as an abbreviation for an extremely racist and socially unacceptable organisation)
I knew that I shouldn't have bought and known this cheesecake that sell was on sale at the mart.
But I bought and knew it.
I cannot stop eating this. I need to stay away from it. That's because it is of the kind of high in calories.
Awwww... It makes me want to eat it angain and again.

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Thank you~ Chantal M and 웬디.
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Using "want to" instead of "wanna" will sound a little better.
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Just remember cheesecake is one word, and since it's not a proper noun (a name or place) it doesn't need to be capitalized!

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