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Please if you want improve Italian language I' M here!

<em>I am looking for new friends</em>

<em>Please, if you want to improve your Italian, I'm here!</em>

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<em>Great job!</em>

<em>Debby</em>

A new day

Today is a new day ,it's sunny and cold ,my heart is fine ,
I love italki , I wait a message, I had sent a message yesterday,I wait a friend say hello to me .
I will thank them

A new day
Today is a new day.  It's sunny and cold. My heart is fine.
I love italki.  I wait for a message.  I had sent a message yesterday.  I wait for a friend to say hello to me.
I will thank him or her.

<em>Great work!</em>

The Chinese Economic Reform

The Chinese Economic Reform was carried out by President Deng in 1979. It was a big and significant step in Chinese history which led China into a new era . What makes the policy so extraordinary is that China began to go abroad, to accept the Western civilization, and opened their minds to the co-existence of traditional and modern culture.
As we all know, China has a very long history and made a great contribution to the world. However, in the old ages, it became a very closed society, or feudal to be exact. China always did business within itself and regarded the foreign companies as a threat to its economy.
Moreover, the government controlled the market. Therefore, the high efficiency of supply and demand did not work in those years.
There were so many historical reasons that I can't explain clearly in such a short essay, but we are on the way of to socialism. Everything is going to be hard because there are no other countries to use as an example. Those leaders with brilliant minds will adjust the policy in time when necessary. The Chinese Economic Reform followed the trend of globalization and met the demand of the condition and situation.
Today we are enjoying the fruits of this great step. We adapt our market model and measures for the development of society and the new Chinese economy has made the world sit up and take notice.Because the economy is the basis of everything like politics and culture, China has been playing a very important role in the world. I'm delighted to witness the huge influence of China on the world. I hope there is a bright future not only for China but also for us as human beings.

<em>Great writing!  I only made two little corrections.</em>

My Favorite American TV Shows

The topic of the table talk today was television. I like watching American TV shows. "The game of Thrones" is one of my favorite US TV series. It's like a historical drama, but actually it's not. The story happened in a magical world where there were dragons, spirit wolves and ravens with three eyes. The mum of the dragons was a very beautiful and kindhearted princess, she set many slaves to free. I like her very much. I hope the new series could be seen as soon as possible.

<em>Great writing!  I only made a few minor corrections.</em>

Cakes and lessons...

I have made cakes for over 3 years. My mom was a teacher in making cakes. So she taught me how to make a cake. After a long time making cakes, I know that passion and patience are very important to do some things. A small thing can change a huge plan. The way you receive and solve your problem is important, too. I love cakes and I'd like to make many kinds of cake, dishes to all whom I love.

<em>Great work and I love cake too!  (When to use "some things" versus "somethings" is a little tricky.)</em>

nice to meet you

My name is Nana Matsumya.I'm 32 years old. I'm from Japan.
I'm studying English. because …<em>I talk to more then people. </em><- I don't understand what you are trying to say here.

<em></em>but English is the more difficult. I have a My motivation is down down down.
But I do to not give up. I can't try to study

<em>Good work!  You did said a lot of things well.</em>

A Double Tragedy

A few Some days ago, there was a terrible accident involving a car and a truck. The car ran into the truck and the car driver died as a result. Yesterday, two friends of the dead man went to the seaside in order to cast his ashes into the water. While they were doing that, a wave hit them and shoved them into the sea. One of them could return swimming to the shore, but the other couldn´t and died. In less than a week two friends died tragically, and another one had a lucky escape. The one that survived is going to need psychological help for a while, not to mention the dead man´s family.

<em>Great writing. Sad story.</em>