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A Double Tragedy Some days ago, there was a terrible accident involving a car and a truck. The car ran into the truck and the car driver died as a result. Yesterday, two friends of the dead man went to the seaside in order to cast his ashes into the water. While they were doing that, a wave hit them and shoved them into the sea. One of them could return swimming to the shore, but the other couldn´t and died. In less than a week two friends died tragically, and another one had a lucky escape. The one that survived is going to need psychological help for a while, not to mention the dead man´s family.

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A Double Tragedy

A few Some days ago, there was a terrible accident involving a car and a truck. The car ran into the truck and the car driver died as a result. Yesterday, two friends of the dead man went to the seaside in order to cast his ashes into the water. While they were doing that, a wave hit them and shoved them into the sea. One of them could return swimming to the shore, but the other couldn´t and died. In less than a week two friends died tragically, and another one had a lucky escape. The one that survived is going to need psychological help for a while, not to mention the dead man´s family.

 

Great writing. Sad story.

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A Double Tragedy

Some A few days ago, there was a terrible accident involving a car and a truck. The car ran into the truck and the car driver of the car died as a result. Yesterday, two friends of the dead man went to the seaside in order to cast his ashes into the water. While they were doing that, a wave hit them and shoved pulled them into the sea. One of them could return swimming swam to the shore, but the other couldn´t couldn't and died. In less than a week two friends died tragically, and another one had a lucky escape. The one that survived is going to need psychological help for a while, ; not to mention the dead man´s man's family.

 

Carlos,

Good job! When you us a contraction in English do not put a space between the apostophe.

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