Brilliant legislator
Due to the position of Taiwan
, and
maybe perhaps also due to global warming, summers are getting hotter and hotter these
years days.
The temperature went up to 35
Celsius degrees
Celsius this year which created the highest record
(Specify when and where - "the highest record to date in Taiwan").
Therefore, people asked the government to install air-conditioners in every public elementary and high school
s so
kids students will stop suffering from the heat.
("every" makes it clear that there are multiple schools so you do not need to +s on schools. Also, kids works but your writing has a professional tone so it is better to use a more specific word.)
However, the government rejected the
claim request for the following reasons :
1. They are afraid that the usage of electricity will hugely increase.
2.
There is a lack of fund
s.
3.
They want to protect the children's health
(from ... more details would be helpful here :)
There's a legislator who happens to have
had studied in Germany.
She said
, "Germany is cool without air-conditioners. Taiwan should
take follow the example of Germany and learn from them!"
Oh my god, she is
so such a genius! She should totally get a Nobel
Prize of
Energy or
stuff something like that
! She deserves
that! it.
Haha! Did she consider how different the climates are of Germany and Taiwan?! This is a great summary of the story. Because it starts with a more academic or professional feel, it is better to use more specifics, just to add more detail and clarity to the summary. Your sarcasm at the end is very funny. Great job!