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I know tips that make learning English a little bit easier. How? I'm a language learner too! I've studied French, Japanese, Mandarin Chinese, and Korean. I love learning about other cultures and ancient history. I also have a passion for fashion and love to be in nature.
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    What's my mother eating?

    My mum begins has begun ignoring me. When I tell her something, she don't pay attention to me. I don't know what I've done wrong. It Looks seems like she is angry with me, but when I ask her what is wrong, she answers says she is okey okay. I think she is just very really tired so that because she has hard work works very hard. Most of the time she is working and I can only see her only in the morning when while preparing for school. I don't know what is on a women's woman's mind when they are 50 years old. Although I tend to think that it doesn't matter what age women are, they are always need to be loved and took to be taken care of. Nowadays, a woman must be both woman and man at the same time.

     

    I don't know about in other countries, and nations but living in Russian Russia it's not worth counting you can't count on men.

    (You could also say, "I don't know about in other countries, but in Russia a woman can't count on a man." This is also correct: "I don't know about in other countries, but in Russia women can't count on men.")

     

    After a divorce women often stay alone without any help. And This thing also happened to my mother too. What's That's why I am trying to study do well in school and after get a good job after I graduate.

    (You could also use "finish" instead of "graduate". "That's why I am trying to do well in school and get a good job after I finish.")


    in order I want to be independent. I am a bit of a feminist. It's just that my mother needs more love and free time, like any other women woman on the Earth which who must work her whole life to provide their her children with food, clothes, a good education and just a happy life.

     

    However, when a woman is the only one providing for her children, that her children don't get the most important thing - love.

    (In this sentence, you need to explain why a woman's children don't get love. That's why I put, "when a woman is the only one providing for her children".)

     

    Very good! Keep writing! If you have any questions about the corrections, please let me know!

    Rachael

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    Self-introduction


    By chance to know this site, I found this site by chance and I find it very interesting.

    (This sounds better, "I found this site by chance and find it very interesting." Drop the second "I".)

     

    This is my first time to write writing a small composition here.
    I would like to introduce myself first.
    My english English name is Amy.


    the This name is very common.

    (This sounds better, "It is a very common name.")


    I like this name because, in Chinese pronunciation "Amy" sounds like "love, beauty".

    (This sounds better, "I like this name it because...")


    In fact, I like every all beautiful things, especially in buildings.
    So Therefore, I am an architect.

     

    If you have any questions, please message me!

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