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Self-introduction
By chance to know this site, I found this site by chance and I find it very interesting.
(This sounds better, "I found this site by chance and find it very interesting." Drop the second "I".)
This is my first time to write writing a small composition here.
I would like to introduce myself first.
My english English name is Amy.
the This name is very common.
(This sounds better, "It is a very common name.")
I like this name because, in Chinese pronunciation "Amy" sounds like "love, beauty".
(This sounds better, "I like this name it because...")
In fact, I like every all beautiful things, especially in buildings.
So Therefore, I am an architect.
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Self-introduction
I found this site by chance and I find it very interesting.
This is my first time writing a small composition here.
I would like to introduce myself first.
My english name is Amy,the name is very common,I like this name because, in Chinese pronunciation “Amy" sounds like "love, beauty".
In fact, I like all beautiful things,especially in buildings.
So I am an architect.
偶然知道这个网站,觉得很有意思。
这是我第一次在这写小作文。
我想先介绍一下我自己。
我的英语名字叫Amy,这个名字很普通,我之所以喜欢是因为用中文的发音,“Amy”听上去很像“爱美”。
事实上我喜欢一切美好的事物,尤其是建筑。
所以我是一名建筑师。
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