i (I) am a little shy when speaking other languages~~now i (I) am taking some tests in order to study abroad(.)

i (I) am looking for someone who can be my friend, who can teach me (English) enlish, who wants have a willing to learn c(C)hinese... i (I) am now living in h(H)angzhou z(Z)hejiang , a beautiful city in c (C)hina.
i am now meeting (have) a problem (,) that i (I) can not talk to others in enlish (English) very, (well) and can not know clearly what others (are)  talking about yet. i (I) am now so worrying (worried) about that.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,everyone, I am (A)abner, a master majou (student) in neuroseury, (I am) 27 years old. I like (to) play basketball,and (I) like (to) watch NBA . I want to learn English because I want to inprove (improve) my oral English and enable me to learn literature from SCI easlily. (easily).
Ok, that is all, good luck,everyone.

We Should learn to Assume Resonsibility

After when we grow up, we must face many things and (we) need to deal with ourselves,(.) (W)when we enter the society,we have been a member for (of)  society. (W)when we reture (return) to home,we have been (are)  a member for (of a) family. (S) so no matter (whether) for (in) society or (in a ) family,we all have responsibility.if you want in the society to have a (place) in the society foothold,you must become have the (a)  person of (with a )  sense of responsibility. now (M)many college students do some things (without a ) do not have feeling of resonsibility,so we enter the (entering) society is very diffcult. (W)whether look for (a) job or get marry. (married), so i (I)  think if you have leart (learn) to assume responsibility(,)  you will (become a better person.)more and more fineness.

Everything is done

It's a hard time to prepare my entrance exam to college. But now I have done everything .......I have been waitting (for) this day (for) 12 years. Meanwhile , I'm also (I am) no longer a child. I have to take more reseponsibilities.I am so glad but sad.
I have to take a long rest to calm my mood. I don't know my grade. Of course , I hope I will have a happy ending.
Maybe I will take a trip. I want to share my photoes. (photos).Would you mind joining me? (and) share my hapiness (happiness) ?

A little disappointed

Well,you may ask ：“hi guys！what's the matter?"
Because I passionately came here but (I) haven't found anyone who is willing to speak English with me,(.) Don't get me wrong, I never complain (about) anyone or anything.
I think maybe they recently didn't come here (recently) so they haven't saw (seen) my apply (reply)  which is send by me.

I just want to express my anxious mood for finding (that I am anxious to find ) a partner.Perhaps you are the right person,so do be (not)  hesitate to get (in) contact with me by my SKYP(E) (address) :augus_jessica!
Looking forward to hearing from you~~~！

please give me a way

Today i (I) am very tormenting (tormented) ,A (a)  foreign teacher asked me a question ,but i (I) think(thought)  about this question (for a) long time ,finally,i (I) did not remember this question,i (I was) am upset ,i (I) study all the time ,but my english is not very good ,i (I)  was beat today ,i lose  ( I lost) my confidence,i (I) do not know how to do (it). w (W)hen i (I)  saw (that) another student can (could) speak fluent english,i (I) believe i (I) can do it ,but now i (I) found my listening and speaking are so poor,I am really very helpless. (W) who can give me (help) a way(?)

Hi,

 I have sympathy for you! Learning English or any language is very hard work! You have written many correct sentences, so do not be discouraged!

Remember that "I" in English is always a capial letter. You are young and you maybe do not have an opportunity to speak with native English speakers very often. But you said that you have a foreign teacher, so try speak as often as possible with the teacher.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is angela, 24. I come from b (B)eijing of china. I graduated from the (course) teaching chinese as a foreign language department of Beijing Langrage (Language)  and Cultuer (Culture)University
Now i (I)  am a c (C)hinese teacher .  and my student ( students)  are  from different national (nations).

Today In Last Year

Today in last year ( my school yesr ended), my college entrance exam had (is) done. All (our) class and teachers went out to celebrate. And it was my first and only time that (I) got drunk. It was not a good feeling but a happy feeling. Because i (I) suffered from the evil (terrible ) (3rd level of) high school grade 3. We studied from 7:20am to 10:20pm, and our weekend is (was) only Saturday 4:00pm to Sunday2:25pm. That's extreme, isnt it? When i (I) was in high school, I'm (was) not an attractive girl. Math makes my grades (so) bad so. But things changed a lot when i (I) steped (stepped) into college. Nobody cares how (what kind of ) a person you were in the past. Everyone got the (has an) equal opportunity to (develop themselves.) build self-buisness. Also fortunatetly i (I) choosed (chose)  a major i (that I) l ike. So i (I)  work hard on (at) it, because i (I) enjoy that! Well, I wish students who finished their high school today can get a good language (have praise) for their hard work. And  (I) wish (that) they can enjoy and work hard for what they like instead of what others push them to work. :)  (do.)

Allways remember to use a capital when you write "I"