Today In Last Year

Today in last year ( my school yesr ended), my college entrance exam had (is) done. All (our) class and teachers went out to celebrate. And it was my first and only time that (I) got drunk. It was not a good feeling but a happy feeling. Because i (I) suffered from the evil (terrible ) (3rd level of) high school grade 3. We studied from 7:20am to 10:20pm, and our weekend is (was) only Saturday 4:00pm to Sunday2:25pm. That's extreme, isnt it? When i (I) was in high school, I'm (was) not an attractive girl. Math makes my grades (so) bad so. But things changed a lot when i (I) steped (stepped) into college. Nobody cares how (what kind of ) a person you were in the past. Everyone got the (has an) equal opportunity to (develop themselves.) build self-buisness. Also fortunatetly i (I) choosed (chose)  a major i (that I) l ike. So i (I)  work hard on (at) it, because i (I) enjoy that! Well, I wish students who finished their high school today can get a good language (have praise) for their hard work. And  (I) wish (that) they can enjoy and work hard for what they like instead of what others push them to work. :)  (do.)

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