My best friend

My best friend is Vera. She is a beautiful girl with long straight hair, always being thoughtful and getting insight into and showing care for others' feelings. We became best friends for that because we have a lot in common. For instance, both of us are crazy about ping-pong ball.When we are in have spare time, we would often spend time practicing playing ping-pong ball and learning from each other. Sometimes we learn skills from those famous players by watching their games. I feel very lucky to have a friend like her.

Great work Kris. Not much correction needed. Don't forget to put a space after a full stop. Keep practicing!

The purpose of life

It is interesting thinking about my mood today.
I Meet met some new friends, did a little something different thing.
It seems that my life has a color again.
I dont know how to say life is going. feels
like white clouds and gentle wind.
But....it seems that I forget what is the purpose of life is.

Good job Didi, keep practicing!

How do you handle stress and pressure?

In my last work job (Or, 'At my last job') I was used to working under pressure every day. We always had too much work to do in only 8 hours so we were obligated to be well organized and we really had must to attach assign importance for to all of our duties. All tasks assigned to me had an equal importance so i have been had to adjusted to working quite quickly and efficiently. Sometimes we paid to people really huge large amounts. (Perhaps you are trying to say, 'We were paid really large amounts by people. Meaning is unclear). We had to be focused on every things which we were doing.
Moreover, there was were so many sudden cases. (Perhaps you could say 'urgent cases'). For example, imagine that you’re doing something very important and you have to finish up this case in 1 hour. and Suddenly your boss told tells you that you now you have to do the other thins something else which is as important as the things what you’re doing now! Sometimes it was difficult to support achieve but anyway I always managed to do both anyway.
I passed by managed so many stresfulls stressful situations that I cant say: yes, I do very well in stresfulls stressful and sophisticated complex situations.

Very well written Aleksandra. Keep up the great work.

Yesterday

Yesterday, I added made a new friend. He is living in American. We talked about 天猫 .(tianmao). He don't didnt know what it was. He say guessed it was a big cat?.
haha. I laughed. I tell he him it's like iherb. It's a shop, an online mall. There are all kinds of goods it sells. sold there.

Good work Yuan. Keep practicing!

Russia

Russia is a great country but it's it have the has shortcomings:
- It's a cold country.
- Our government don't doesn't have a dialogue with the people.
- Our legislation don't doesn't have a law which protects animals rights. It is important for to me.
- Yeah, we have free medicine but it the medicine is badly bad. Because the doctors have low salary and so they are very lazy. As a result they are negligent to in their work.

That's all.

Good work Paul.

Life-or-Death Rumble tumble (rumble refers to a sound, for example a stomach can rumble. I think you mean tumble, which is a synonym of fight. Good title.)

The other day I bought some aromatic pet-friendly pyrethrum (this is a scientific word and is not used in everyday speech) coilsthat have been grown without agricultural chemicals. It is an environmentally friendly chrysanthemum that the sent scent (as you mentioned) also has an the effect on of keeping insects away.

Right before I got these coils, my patience was running wearing pretty thin with those mosquitoes which were prowling (prowling is what a cat or a theif might do. Some suggestions for mosquitoes would be buzzing or flying) about for their sustenance. They were eating me alive and I lost count of the number of bites. (great use of expression here)
They truly pissed me off when after I noticed that my right cheek was bleeding and my face looks looked like so an ugly zombie. It made me get ready to have a life-or-death rumble tumble with them.

I am less concerned about whether my dogs get mosquito bites or not.
it's This is because they already had a heartworm testing done and they both have taken take the best preventive medication regularly.

Anyway, I set up a coil on a/the shelf in the entrance and burnt it now. Let's see how it works they are from now on.
Thank you for reading this and I would really appreciate it if you would help me with my notebook entry.

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Great work Ai. You use expressions well and have quite a varied vocabulary.

Life things

I love the United States where the majority of people are so kind and friendly. Everything is new and so different than from my country, and although I like it here this is the most hard hardest challenge that ever did and I have ever faced. Now I'm here stopping my life to learn a new language and continue.

Could anyone correct this LETTER OF APPLICATION? Thanks a bunch¡

LETTER OF APPLICATION
Writing Task
Need a summer job? Do you enjoy meeting new people? We´re looking for lively young waiters and waitresses to work at our sea-front café. Drop in or drop us a line if you´d like to earn some extra cash this summer.
Contact: Barry Murphy, Bright´n´Bubbly Bistro, 3, Apple Street, Brighton.
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Mr. Barry Murphy
Bright´n´Bubbly Bistro

3 Apple street, Brighton

Dear Mr. Murphy,

In response to your advertisement I would like to indicate express my interest in the post of for the postiton of waiter you are offering. Some extra money for my post-graduate course next September would be awesome¡

I´m a 23 years old Spanish young adult. I have a Masters Degree in Primary Teaching and I have recently passed the First Certificate in English (FCe) of at Cambridge University. so that As you can see I have a good a good command of both English and Spanish, two needed requisites prerequisites/languages that will enable me to cope with any kind of clients a variety of customers I might meet serve at your café.

Even thoughAlthough I don´t have much experience as a waiter people describe me as an outgoing, sociable and friendly kind of person. These are key attributes that I consider, and I guess you too, essential to deal with a job like this.
On the other side, It would be very nice of you to greatly appreciated if you could send me further details on about the job. Is it full-time or part-time? How much money are we you considering to pay me? What would be the renumeration rate? (/rate of pay)

Finally I´d like to inform you that I am immediately available for both an interview and employment at any time. If you need any more information, please don´t hesitate to contact me.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely yours, Yours Sincerely (this is more appropriate for an application)

Miguel. (on the actual application you would inlcude your surname too.)

Great work Miguel. You could also include a sentence such as 'Please find my resume attached'. Overall a great application and good luck getting the job!