My best friend

My best friend is Vera. She is a beautiful girl with long straight hair, always being thoughtful and getting insight into and showing care for others' feelings. We became best friends for that because we have a lot in common. For instance, both of us are crazy about ping-pong ball.When we are in have spare time, we would often spend time practicing playing ping-pong ball and learning from each other. Sometimes we learn skills from those famous players by watching their games. I feel very lucky to have a friend like her.

Great work Kris. Not much correction needed. Don't forget to put a space after a full stop. Keep practicing!