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    Writing a good luck/congratulations card

    Good luck
    不好意思我因为请假而那么突然跟你告别。 不过我觉得这样可能好一点要不然我会哭的! 听到你要搬到美国让我很难过, 但是我也为你很高兴, 去那边生活真是非常好的机会, 你会认识好多人以及<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>经验</strike>(经历)</font>很多新的事。 谢谢你来到英国,短期<font style="background-color: yellow;">(内)</font>跟我工作! 我希望我们会保持联系。 如果你<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>受</strike>(遇)</font>到什么英文语言障碍的问题我很乐意帮你。 我们也可以视频练习!<font style="background-color: yellow;">大吉大利(technically,大吉大利 is not wrong, but it's used to wish someone <a class="p1-12" href="http://cn.bing.com/dict/search?q=big&FORM=BDVSP6&mkt=zh-cn" h="ID=Dictionary,5109.1"><font color="#000000">big</font></a><font color="#000000"> </font><a class="p1-12" href="http://cn.bing.com/dict/search?q=fortuue&FORM=BDVSP6&mkt=zh-cn" h="ID=Dictionary,5110.1"><font color="#000000">fortuue</font></a><font color="#000000"> </font><a class="p1-12" href="http://cn.bing.com/dict/search?q=and&FORM=BDVSP6&mkt=zh-cn" h="ID=Dictionary,5111.1"><font color="#000000">and</font></a><font color="#000000"> </font><a class="p1-12" href="http://cn.bing.com/dict/search?q=great&FORM=BDVSP6&mkt=zh-cn" h="ID=Dictionary,5112.1"><font color="#000000">great</font></a><font color="#000000"> </font><a class="p1-12" href="http://cn.bing.com/dict/search?q=profit&FORM=BDVSP6&mkt=zh-cn" h="ID=Dictionary,5113.1"><font color="#000000">profit</font></a>. 多用于生意开张祝福。The most common ones are 一切顺利,一路顺风,一帆风顺 etc.)
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    Congratulations
    恭喜你<font style="background-color: yellow;">找(</font><font style="background-color: yellow;">到)</font>工作! 我一点都不惊讶你那么成功<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>也受到</strike>(并被)</font>各个公司<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>的</strike></font>录取。 我为你特别骄傲, 又厉害又努力。 希望你工作顺利。

    I would really appreciate your help on making sure theses paragraphs make sense! Thank-you very much :)


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    May 11, 2017
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    Revision: 美国童年的回忆:睡觉时间(上)

    在我的成长过程中,我特别讨厌<strike>就寝</strike>(<font style="background-color: yellow;">上床 or 睡觉,就寝 is tooformal here, which means retire for the night.)</font>时间。到了要就寝时间<strike>的时候</strike>(<font style="background-color: yellow;">tautology,时间 or 时候</font>),我经常感觉不困,可是我的父母一直告诉我:先在床上躺会儿,一会儿就困了。这是不准确的,上了床还是不困,可是因为我很小,所以非得要听爸爸妈妈所说的,没有别的选择。
    在哪个时候我的就寝时间通常是九点钟。有一天晚上,我请求爸爸:请你让我在十点钟睡觉,可以吗?

    他回答:现在你的睡觉时间是八点钟。

    我<font style="background-color: yellow;">迷惑不解(Great choice of words, GOOD!)</font>,我以为我听错了。我再一遍请求他:我在九点钟平常也不累,十点钟只是比平常晚了 一个小时。比平常晚一个小时睡觉可以吗?

    我爸冷静地宣布:你的睡觉时间现在是七点钟。
     
    <strike>他的想法突然明白了</strike>(<font style="background-color: yellow;">This translates </font><font style="background-color: yellow;">into his</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> thought suddenly undertood.That's not grammatical. 他的想法突然 </font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">被 </font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">理解 </font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">了,</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">明白</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> is usually active. </font>)。我又惊惶又失望。

    我小声说:爸?我觉得九点钟是最好的睡觉时间。请你让我在九点钟睡觉,可以吗?
    我爸爸态度没改变。他回答:可以。

    过了那个晚上之后,我再也没有请求他改变我的就寝时间。


    WOW, what a strict dad!

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    March 30, 2017
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    Could someone please explain the structure of this sentence to me? Thanks! Here is the sentence: Kim Jong Nam had been living in China for many years so it his death is revealed to have been orchestrated by Pyongyang Beijing will view it as a direct slight. It seems to me that the sentence can be divided up into there segments, and each of them is complete. There is something I find confusing: what does "so it" do bewteen the first two parts? Why is there not a conjunction between the last two segments? Thank you!
    February 21, 2017
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    黎明 is rarely used in a name. 晓 makes more sense, which also means dawn or auroral (as an adjective).
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    February 6, 2017
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    December 2, 2016
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    Why use "mother fucker" to call someone names? I'm confusing. Someone help please? Is this abusive term reffering to sb's own father? That makes no sense to me. Just curious. I know it's an offensive word, I just don't get it. Edit: confused* (maybe? I'm still learning.)
    November 29, 2016
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