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Mi día (25 de Julio)
Me desperté a las cinco de la mañana, después aprende mi computadora para estudiar Español. Ahorita mi nivel de Español es intermedio, pero tengo problemas con la conjugación de verbos. Perdón, salí por una tangente. Paso una hora, y fui al centro comercial con mis tíos para ver El Planeta de los Simios: Confrontación. Me gusto, creo por que la película investiga los efectos de poder sobre humanos y simios. Aprendí que el poder puede pervertir a las personas, si no son responsables. Después de la película, regrese al departamento de mis tíos y fui a dormir a la una y media.
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About new tecnologies in the schoolNowadays, the school has changed. There are new tecnologies are present everydays in our school.
On the one hand, These resources provide different means to teach children compared to other technologies students have worked with in the past. For example, the computer in the classroom offers a lot of motivating activities for the children to learn. But if we plus (what do you mean here?) the whiteboard, possibilities multiply. Moreover, all material that the teacher can find, he can use to improve his work, and therefore, his classes.
On the other hand, Furthermore, with the improvements in technology, family communication has changed because the teacher may use email and or other computer tools so to contact them rapidly. This is something that was not in the past.0 votedJuly 25, 20142- Mi día (25 de Julio) Me desperté a las cinco de la mañana, después aprende mi computadora para estudiar Español. Ahorita mi nivel de Español es intermedio, pero tengo problemas con la conjugación de verbos. Perdón, salí por una tangente. Paso una hora, y fui al centro comercial con mis tíos para ver Planeta de los Simios: Confrontación. Me gusto, creo por que la película investiga los efectos de poder sobre humanos y simios. Aprende que el poder puede pervertir personas, si no son responsables. Después de la película, regrese al apartamiento de mis tíos y fui a dormir a la una y media.July 25, 201420
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Why do I want to travelWell... I'd always wanted to travel and live abroad. I'm that kind of person that doesn't like to feel confined. I want to discover more of the world that is outside...Yes, I know it sounds too much really (or you can use super instead of really )corny but it's what I think!... :)
But, I don't want to travel or going abroad just for fun. I want to study and make my career practice in the EU or another country meanwhile I live the purpose God's intended for me. I mean, I love Him and I know that I can do so many things being outside...
Well... I will write something later.. I hope somebody will read it! hahah!
Buen trabajo! Escribes inglés muy bien, hay aspectos que neccestias a mejorar, pero puedo entender tu oración perfectamente.0 votedJuly 24, 20140Corrections in red
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TravelingWell, I love traveling. I want to know all those paradises, beaches and mountains and everything that I've seen in pictures. When I see those hidden islands like the Marietas's island in Mexico....woaaaa. I want to be there. I'd always wanted to wake up a morning, open my eyes and see a beautiful sea in front of me, with I heard the birds chirping or something like that. So..for the next year, I'm planning to travel to EU, but I don't know exactly where should I go...I'll beI'll be grateful if besides correcting my writing, you please put a reccomendation as to where I should go.
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