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About new tecnologies in the school

Nowadays, the school has changed. There are new tecnologies are present everydays in our school.
On the one hand, These resources provide different means to teach children compared to other technologies students have worked with in the past. For example, the computer in the classroom offers a lot of motivating activities for the children to learn. But if we plus (what do you mean here?) the whiteboard, possibilities multiply. Moreover, all material that the teacher can find, he can use to improve his work, and therefore, his classes.

On the other hand, Furthermore, with the improvements in technology, family communication has changed because the teacher may use email and or other computer tools so to contact them rapidly. This is something that was not in the past.

About new technologies in the school

Nowadays, the school has changed. The New technologies are present everydays in our college.
On the one hand, the resources with which we work are different. For example, the computer in the classroom offers a lot of motivating activities for the children (or "students"). But if we plus include the whiteboard, possibilities multiply. Moreover, all material that the teacher can find, contribute to work the instruction with this tool (or "when using this tool").
On the other hand, family communication is different too because the teacher uses email and other computer tools so to contact them currently.
This is something that didn't happen in the past.