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    基督山恩仇记 - 第一章

    基督山恩仇记(又名基督山伯爵)是一个经典的传奇。这本小说讲的是爱德蒙•邓蒂斯这个水手的故事。这个故事就像生活一样,有泪有笑。形势的变化和公平的胜利是我最喜欢这本书的原因。我现在看的版本是给学中文的外国人出版的,很简单。每次看完,我都会在网上放一章给大家看。欢迎大家纠正和评论。希望大家能通过我的短文了解和喜欢基督山恩仇记这本书。

    第一章

    1815年法老号三桅帆船在马赛港靠岸了。摩莱尔船主在码头上跟好奇者看船过来。过了一会儿,他忍耐不住上船了,但是每个海员显得很丧气。邓格拉斯把不幸的消息告诉他,说黎克勒船长患脑膜炎死了。那个勇敢,令人尊敬的人临终时请爱德蒙把一包东西转给伯托兰元帅爱尔巴岛去。当时拿破仑皇帝的身体健康极了,所以有些人预期他有可能会逃脱爱尔巴到法国去。法老号到马赛之后,爱德蒙把什么都告诉摩莱尔船主了。摩莱尔先生很聪明,所以他想到如果有谁知道他跟皇帝见过面,麻烦就很多了。

    卫生和收税的官跟邓蒂斯在一起观察法老号船舱的时候,邓格拉斯向爱德蒙扫了一眼,露出愤恨的目光。他心里说船长死了之后,邓蒂斯和谁都没商量一下就当新的船长了。在邓格拉斯的眼中他发号施令,很不喜欢那么年轻的人似乎已经不用听别人的建议了,所以就看不起他。很有可能爱德蒙的麻烦快要就开始了。。。

    我只改了第一段,而且没有用彩色笔,不好意思

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    August 6, 2014
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    Say something about your hometown?

    what's the name of your hometown?

    Is that a big city or a small place?

    Please describe your hometown a little

    How long have you been living there?

    Do you like your hometown?

    Do you like living there?

    What do you like(most) about your hometown?

    Is there anything you dislike about it?

    Do you think you'll continue living there for a long time?

    July 19, 2014
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    Describe a game you played in child


    1:when you play,where you play
    2:How to play
    3:who you play with

    July 18, 2014
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    How to distinct these words? lie lying lay laying lied
    July 18, 2014
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