Essay #477 "Feedback on Teaching Process" 08.05.19

As in every Activity feedback is crucial for its a teacher's development and further grows, that is why teachers should be evaluated by their students. This would not only help to correct educational approaches and find the most efficient one, but also provide a basis to recognize teachers achievements. In my opinion, this system should be introduced in every educational institution, as this would dramatically improve the overall level of education.

First of all, teachers should know and understand that all their activity is assessed by student they teach. This would definitely change their approach to their education and they would inspect the way they educate their students more thoroughly. This would help to improve educational performances and to adapt school or university curricula in the most efficient way.

Another point is that teachers would be able to be recognized for their achievements as students may provide them with good feedback. This also would have a highly positive effect as teachers would get another impulse to provide a quality education, as they will know that all they do would be valued. In many cases, teachers lose their interest in the improving improvement of their educational techniques as they do not see the results of their effort.

Finally, this approach would also help students to understand what teachers’ main goals and what they should expect from them. This clear up the idea of education for students and in order to evaluate teachers work, they would have to better understand their own aims and how teachers should facilitate their development. Thus, this system would be highly beneficial both for students and teachers.

To conclude, in spite of the fact that some people believe that teachers should not be assessed by their students as they definitely inferior to them and we should maintain this hierarchy, this is not true. Actually, proper feedback from students can not only improve educational techniques of certain teachers, but also would have a highly beneficial effect on educational system overall. That is why all educational institutions should consider the adoption of this approach, which would benefit them in a highly positive manner.

Wonderful writing, this is a great piece. You have articulated yourself very well and are writing better than many native English speakers. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. 

Sport in our life

Sport is an important thing in the life of each everyone  person. You must be a healthy person.
A huge amount of people are suffering from obesity, obesity rates have been increasing each year because they don't move enough. All of them prefer to sit in front of their TV, watch, and eat something.
Years ago, any sports activities were encouraged by our government. People did morning exercises, there were lots of sports sections, and varied competitions at schools. For instance, I used to go in to various sporting events at school sections.
I couldn't decide what sports activities I wanted to participate in. I would do football, boxing, cycling and so on.
My big achievement in cycling was third place in a local competition.
I didn't surmise to become a professional sportsman  person. Professional sport is a quite complicated area where you need to have a coach, you need to train almost every single day, and where you can get injuries at any time. What's more Furthermore, if you are a student you can't have enough time to study properly.
Now, I am a grown person and I go to the gym three times a week. I like it.
I want to be a healthy person and become a role model for my children.
Also, I would like to try a little extreme al sports. For the thing, I have a dream to fly on a supersonic plane or jump from the tallest mountain with a springy rope. I love of the extremal extreme sports. I like a the state when your level of adrenaline is top high and you can move any mountains. Extremal  extreme sports can give you this opportunity.

Was pretty great overall, keep up the good work!

School practice

Subject: School practice


I hereby inform you that Arizai Clemente, a student of the Psychology Department at Iztacala of Autonomous University of Mexico has requested authorization for  the application of two interviews to of our staff and an. The student is also requesting an observation process within our work areas for school purposes. These activities have been authorized and carried out on May 13th and 14th, from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m.

The present is extended for the uses and purposes that she required in the city of London, England, on the 16th day of the month of May of the year 2017.



Yours sincerely,
Mark Jhonson

This was well done, it is very formal so I hope that you meant it as such. The complex words made some conjunctions sound slightly confusing or unnatural, but it was good overall. I also separated the first sentence into two because of its formality as it sounded long-winded and would be considered a run on sentence in proper English. Great job overall though!

A board

A week ago we replaced a damaged board with a repaired new one and the system started working normally again. We've noticed unusually low values of the Parameter A in comparison with the Parameter B for 2 days. We would appreciate if you could give us some advice on this matter.

It made sense, and I understood everything! Just a couple small changes to make it sound a little more natural! Great job!

My student

I teach chemistry. I have taught mathematics and physics too.

I have only one student, he is 16 years old. Sometimes it's been very funny because when he was learning the name of the periodic table elements, he invented other names and I thought "Where did that name came from?" Hahaha

I can see that he has improved a lot in chemistry. He is able to name compounds, he can balance rections, he can calculate molar mass...

I think we are doing a good job together.