School practice
Subject: School practice
I hereby inform you that Arizai Clemente, student of the Psychology Department, Iztacala of Autonomous University of Mexico has requested authorization for the application of two interviews to our staff and an observation process within our work areas for school purposes. These activities have been authorized and carried out on May 13 and 14, from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m.
The present is extended for the uses and purposes that she required in the city of London England, on the 16th day of the month of May of the year 2017.
Yours sincerely,
Mark Jhonson
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School practice
Subject: School practiceI hereby inform you that Arizai Clemente, a student of the Psychology Department at Iztacala of Autonomous University of Mexico has requested authorization for the application of two interviews to of our staff and an. The student is also requesting an observation process within our work areas for school purposes. These activities have been authorized and carried out on May 13th and 14th, from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m.
The present is extended for the uses and purposes that she required in the city of London, England, on the 16th day of the month of May of the year 2017.
Yours sincerely,
Mark Jhonson
This was well done, it is very formal so I hope that you meant it as such. The complex words made some conjunctions sound slightly confusing or unnatural, but it was good overall. I also separated the first sentence into two because of its formality as it sounded long-winded and would be considered a run on sentence in proper English. Great job overall though!
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