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My cat Brist
Some years ago, I had a cat called Brist. My husband chose the name because the cat was very quiet and “brist” in Basque is the onomatopoeia of …something very fast.
After riding on bike our bikes, (since you and your husband both rode bicycles, in other words, more than one bike, "bike" should be plural) we used to do some stretching exercises and Brist wanted to help us. So, it put its legs forward, just like cats do when they wake up. Then it put itself upside down and it moved its body to one side and then to the other one. (What you wrote is correct, but I think this sounds more natural)
It also loved to hang from the curtains and to swing like a monkey. After that, it went to one side of the sofa and they it (just one cat, so it is singular) scratched the fabric. I bought something a piece (piece is correct, but I think the word "something" or "an item" sounds more natural) in from the animal shop so that it could do it's the manicure there, but it was useless.
One day it fell down from the 5th floor and it was not injured at all! So, it was proved that the Spanish saying “El gato tiene 7 vidas” is real. (In the US we have the same saying but we say "the cat has 9 lives". How funny!)0 votedJune 20, 20171A Beautiful Country
Hello. I am trying to learn English and I would like that it if you can could help me with corrections.
I am from Guatemala and I want to tell to you that Guatemala is a beautiful country. Many people come to Guatemala because they discover in our country there are many options ("many things to do" or "many things to see" is better than "many options" in my opinon) and they can know learn about our culture.
Guatemala has many touristics sites (I also think "sites for tourism" is better). Places that are all wonderful all they are wonderful. The access to Accessing our country is not difficult and you can discover that you don't need much money to come to Guatemala.
I invite to you to Guatemala: "Heart of the Mayans word (world?)"**Great job. Only some minor corrections. One tip: when you ask for a favor you usually say "I would like it if you could (not can) help me with corrections/doing the dishes/etc." I hope this helps!**
Amos
0 votedJanuary 11, 20171Tuesday
My day began with cold so I just used my job's clothes and a simple coat because I thought that finally the sun will could arrived but it was wrong, never arrived sun.The beginning of the day was cold so I just wore my work clothes and a simple coat because I thought the sun would come out but I was wrong, it never did.
So I just want a coffe cup and I had to wait until 17h30 when I out my job , go to the stop bus , arrived my house and finally take a coffe cup.
I just wanted a cup of coffee but I had to wait until to 17h30 to get off work, go to the bus stop, arrive at my house, and then I finally got a cup of coffee.
My days often are quick becuase I'm working around 8 hours and when I'm at home I just eat, take a shower, and read a book or view a video of youtube, for now it is my days until when I go to university in april .
My days go by quickly because I'm working around 8 hours a day and when I'm at home I just eat, take a shower, and read a book or watch a youtube video. For now, that will be my days until I go to university in April.
**Muy bien! Some tips:
- Clothes you wear at your job = "work clothes"
- You "watch" a youtube video. "View" is more formal or abstract. For example "I view stars through the telescope".
- will could = "would"I hope this helps!**
0 votedJanuary 11, 20171
