Tuesday

Note - I changed simple coat to thin coat as I think this is what you were trying to communicate. 

Tuesday

The beginning of the day was cold so I just wore my work clothes and a simple coat because I thought the sun would come out but I was wrong, it never did.

So I just want a coffe cup and I had to wait until 17h30 when I out my job , go to the stop bus , arrived my house and finally take a coffe cup.

I just wanted a cup of coffee but I had to wait until to 17h30 to get off work, go to the bus stop, arrive at my house, and then I finally got a cup of coffee.

My days often are quick becuase I'm working around 8 hours and when I'm at home I just eat, take a shower, and read a book or view a video of youtube, for now it is my days until when I go to university in april .

My days go by quickly because I'm working around 8 hours a day and when I'm at home I just eat, take a shower, and read a book or watch a youtube video. For now, that will be my days until I go to university in April.

**Muy bien! Some tips:
- Clothes you wear at your job = "work clothes"
- You "watch" a youtube video. "View" is more formal or abstract. For example "I view stars through the telescope".
- will could = "would"

I hope this helps!**

Tuesday

this is how i wrote it and understand your words. ill hope you'll like it.

my day began so cold so i use my clothes, a simple coat i used to wear in my job because i thought that maybe will arise but i was wrong. the never arrived.

so i just take a cup of coffee because i had to wait until 17 hours and 30 minutes until i off to duty. then go to the bus and go home and finally take some coffee again.

my days are often quick because it was my routine to work 8 hours a day. when im at home i just it, take a shower and read a book or view some videos on youtube. for now its all my day until time will come ill go back to the university in april.

mark - philippines

Tuesday

*That's how I would write it*