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Hey all :3 My name's Sissy and im Bulgarian so i speak native bulgarian.Im 15 but Ive been studying english for 10 years so im pretty good at it.I also studied french for an year and am at level B1.!I love photography ,psychologie,cooking,shopping,video games,tea, reading , watching anime or movies etc.Im a big animal lover and i recently went from vegetarian to vegan and im feeling very well and in harmony with everything
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    Could someone correct my grammatical mistakes or unnatural sentences?

    I've been praticing essay writing and I wrote some sentences but i don't know if they seem natural or gramatically correct to put in an essay or not.... so plz help me out!!
    1. Human beings are innate inventors and innovators
    2. We have been trying endlessly  to bring more satisfaction in our lives.

    3. In this moment, we should carefully consider the benefits of the developement and the shortcomings that come along with it. 

    4. Cellphone is a terrific invention of this generation .
    5. We cannot refute the benefits of cellphones but there is always a price for them. 
    6. Many people are experiencing discomfort everyday feeling bound by the cellphones.
    7. Moreover, the danger of talking on cellphone while driving is a well-known fact.
    8. If we cannot deal with the cons of the progress, we might become slaves of the technology which we developed in order to improve our lives.
    i wrote these and even though they are grammatically correct but they still seem really weird or unmatched or unnatural...:( so could anyone fix these sentences using more academic level of words and structure??

     

     

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    July 14, 2014
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    July 13, 2014
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    To be successful

    Success isn't easy. You have to work hard for that. Surely you'll encounter a series of failure moments , but actually that's not the problem. The real problem is to let the failure win the battle. Many people feel disappointed after they fail , but it's not the end of the world , we have to fail , we have to learn from our mistakes , even the baby on his first attempts to walk , he stands up and falls down , but he never stops trying , he never says '' Hey, I can't walk , I'll give up " , and eventually he succeeds .

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    July 13, 2014
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    Congratulations.

    You can say It doesn't matter, but I think if you remember the date of birth <em>of</em> somebody, you really appreciate this person. My Dear friend Alexander, congratulations! The most sincere, heartful, soulful guy! Have a good health, you and all members of your family. I wish you inspiration in every field of life! I know you can...
    Embracing you warmly.

    Julia.

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    July 13, 2014
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    July 12, 2014
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    Japanese Earthquake

    I watched <em>videos on </em>youtube today.
    It was about messages from NY people When
    there was a big earthquake in Japan.
    Japanese TV seldom shows videos like this.
    Probably <em>in </em>many countries people worried about us and prayed for us.
    I really appreciate it.
    Although I wanted to know earlier,I'm happy to be able to know this video.

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    July 12, 2014
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