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To be successful Success is'nt easy. You have to work hard for that. Surely you'll encounter a series of failure moments , but actually that's not the problem. The real problem is to let the failure win the battle. Many people feel disappointed after they fail , but it's not the end of the world , we have to fail , we have to learn from our mistakes , even the baby on his first attempts to walk , he stands up and falls down , but he never stops trying , he never says '' Hay, I can't walk , I'll give up " , and eventually he succeeds .

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Thanks, I really needed to hear this sentence

 

The real problem is to let the failure win the battle.

 

And good English!

 

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To be successful

Success isn't easy. You have to work hard for that it. Surely you'll encounter a series of failures

moments , but actually that's not the problem. The real problem is to let the failure win the battle. Many people feel disappointed after they fail , but it's not the end of the world , we have to fail , we have to learn from our mistakes , even the baby on his its first attempts to walk , he stands up and falls down , but he never stops trying , he never says '' Hay, I can't walk , I'll give up " , and eventually he succeeds .

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To be successful

Success isn't easy. You have to work hard for that. Surely you'll encounter a series of failure moments , but actually that's not the problem. The real problem is to let the failure win the battle. Many people feel disappointed after they fail , but it's not the end of the world , we have to fail , we have to learn from our mistakes , even the baby on his first attempts to walk , he stands up and falls down , but he never stops trying , he never says '' Hey, I can't walk , I'll give up " , and eventually he succeeds .

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There are only a few minor errors in it, so well done. I changed some sentences to make them sound more natural. "hay" is usually spelt Hey, but in dialouge I think sometimes you can get away with how you'd like to say things depending on the baby's' accent
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Good job !

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