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    Plastic surgery should be more socially accepted.please correct :) Plastic surgery should be more socially accepted for these two reasons. First, some people have to have plastic surgeries because of medical reasons. There are people who have inborn disabilities like a malocclusion. Malocclusion means occlusion relations which become a problem due to mismatched teeth. It is hereditary and environmental disease. Malocclusion patients are difficult to make a sound correctly, and difficult to chew and swallow. Not only that they are easy to get a cavity and stomach trouble. In severe cases, they can’t chew anything and get serious eating obstacles. They have to have plastic surgeries, in addition to treating orthodontics for their health. Cases of losing eye or nose because of an accident or a disease also good reasons for plastic surgery. So, plastic surgery gives a chance to people who have appearance disease to live more beauty. Second, plastic surgery can be a social solution for several people. Some people are easy to be misunderstood if their appearance looks sleepy or angry. For example, someone have oblique eyes and if they want to find a job in service industry, they have difficulties in finding a job than people who have smiling eyes because they look angry all the time. Moreover, when they get a job, they can be easily misunderstood by their guests like “Do you reluctant to do up my hair?” in hair shop. And someone who has a face asymmetry of right and left side is hard to give people reliable feeling, because people feel reliable generally when a person has a symmetrical face of right and left side. If people having easily misunderstanding appearance have plastic surgeries, they will be good to be looked at and easily find a job especially in the service industry. Of course, they are easy to maintain good relationships.
    July 12, 2014
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    July 5, 2014
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    Plastic Surgery should be allowed socially Do you know ‘Let美人 project’? Let美人 project is television program on Story on to support amount of money to people who want to have a plastic surgery. It has continued for 4 seasons from December 2011 and give chance to make over for 54 people. All of people who have surgeries through this program have serious looks complex. Usually, social point of view on plastic surgery is that plastic surgery brings about diverse side effects and is symbol of lookism. What was worse, picture that satirize plastic surgery was formed like right photo on internet. I thought that too for long years, however, after watching ‘Let美人 project’ at 2011 I changed my mind about plastic surgery completely. Now, I think that some people need to have plastic surgeries necessarily and people who have plastic surgeries have appropriate reasons. Plastic surgery-Plastic surgery’ is wide meaning that includes reconstruction and aesthetic-has a positive influence. Plastic surgery should be allowed socially and there are followed three reasons.
    July 5, 2014
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    Plastic Surgery should be allowed socially Do you know "Let美人 project"? Let美人 project is television program on Story on to support amount of money to people who want to have a plastic surgery. It has continued for 4 seasons from December 2011 and give chance to make over for 54 people. All of people who have surgeries through this program have serious looks complex. Usually, social point of view on plastic surgery is that plastic surgery bring about diverse side effects and is symbol of lookism. What was worse, picture that satirize plastic surgery was formed like that photo. I thought that too for long years, however, after watching “Let美人 project” at 2011 I changed my mind about plastic surgery completely. Now, I think that some people need to have plastic surgeries necessarily and people who have plastic surgeries have appropriate reasons. Plastic surgery has a positive influence. please correct :))
    July 5, 2014
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    July 1, 2014
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     안녕하세요? 한국말로 써 봅니다. 3년 동안 한국에서 살았지만, 한국말을 더 공부 해야 합니다.

     

    지금은 영어 선생님입니다. 2013년에는 영어를 배울 수 있는 책을 만들었습니다. 1년 동안 영어만 사용했고, 한국말을 잊어버렸습니다.

     

     italki에 대해 오랫동안 알아왔지만 이제서야 여기에 왔습니다. 사람들을 만나게 되서 반갑습니다!

     

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    July 1, 2014
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    Plastic Surgery should be allowed socially There are three reasons that having a plastic surgery should be allowed socially. First, the medical reason. There are people who have inborn disabilities like a malocclusion, they have to have plastic surgeries for their health. Second, the social reason. Some people are easy to be misunderstood because of their appearance like a sleepy or angry eyes. If they have plastic surgeries, they will be good to look and easily find a job especially service job. Third, the personal reason. Regrettably, "appearance is also competitiveness" sentence is a reality. So many people who have pretty appearance have plastic surgeries like a feeler procedure. and they have a confidence by their advanced appearance. For these three reasons, having a plastic surgery should be allowed because of plastic surgery is a present to live in the better world.
    July 1, 2014
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