just as a reference, it's not "Please correction," but instead, it's "Please correct". :)

Plastic Surgery should be allowed socially.

There are three reasons thatwhy having a plastic surgery should be allowed socially. First, the there is a medical reason. There are people who have inborn disabilities like a malocclusion,; they have to have plastic surgeries for their health. Second, there is the social reason. Some people are easy to be misunderstood because of their appearance like a sleepy or angry eyes. If they have plastic surgeries, they will be good to look at and easily find a job especially service job in the service industry. Third, the there is a personal reason. Regrettably, the quote, "appearance is also competitiveness," sentence is a reality. So many people who have a pretty appearance have plastic surgeries like a feeler (I'm not really sure what you mean by feeler) procedure. and They have a build their confidence by their advanced  because of their new appearance. For these three reasons, having a plastic surgery should be allowed because of plastic surgery is a present (maybe necessary? present doesn't work in this context) to live in the better world.