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About Quip
Several days beforeago, I found an APP in the Apple Store, which named is Quip. Quip is a online writing and chatting service, and it allows many people to write a document in at the same time. I think it's a great invention.
I have several friends in different cities. We haven't seen each other for many years. I introduced Quip to them, and they joined the Quip system immediately. We then began to write a Chinese novel in Quip from then. The novel connects us together again. We all thank Quip (We are all thankful for Quip).
Quip is very intelligent works well for the same time operation real-time operations. If my friend is writing a paragraph, I can see a lock icon before the paragraph. It means I cannot modify the paragraph at the same time. In the computer software field, it is belonging to a a type of technology called network synchronization computing.
The friends ourselves We are very happy in Quip. But Quip, however, is not a fully free payment software. If I want to share my document to more than 5 people (not include the exact 5 number), I should must pay money to use Quip. It is the business in Quip company.
I searched Quip in Baidu, and found that Quip was founded in 2012 by the previous CTO of Facebook. I think he is very clever, because he found some a fresh requirement of people - Chatting need based on something, e.g., a document via a document.Good job. Be careful with your verb tenses (you sometimes switch between present and past tenses abruptly.) Additionally, you generally should not begin a sentence with a conjunction (and, but, etc.)
0 votedOctober 29, 20141Topic:Idols
well Today lets talk about one of my favour favorite idols - Carnoeron Cameron Russell. She is a supermodel from the Victoria's Secrect fashion show. I have seen her in plenty of magazines, and she's gorgeous, amazing and glamorous.But She didnt quite draw my attention, at the beginning, however, until I heard her speech from TED(the Technology entertainment design). I was totally into her speech.
I have learned that she was is not just a pretty girl with a cutest face and she made me redefine the beauty. She said as a model, she has may have the thinnest thighs, brightest hair and the coolest clothes,but she feels insecure, because she needs to worry about how she looks like everyday.,and In fact,models are just a cover or image. They are constructed by groups of professionals, hairstylist, dresser, photographers and all of their assistants. They built this,built the beautiful things.
I guess the cause of this phenomena could be the superficaility of people. Their definition of beauty not only depends on health and youth, but also as on tall,slender figures and good skin. Indeed, in order to satisfy the popular tastes of the public，these photos have been pre-produced and post-produced by experts. Thus, after the retouching,models are not themselves anymore, and their beauty are is not realistic but becoming rather virtual...
So Russell's point had ensure has shown me what beauty is, and that's why she is one of my favourite idols...Good job! Things to watch out for:
1. Be careful when using compound sentences. A compound sentence can only be made up of two independent clauses connected by a conjunction. A few of your sentences were much longer than that. These are called "run-on" sentences and are not grammatically correct.
2. Make sure to always check your subject-verb agreement. This means, if you have a singular noun, make sure to use a singular verb conjugation (For example, you should say "Their beauty is not realistic" NOT "There beauty are not realistic" because beauty is a singular noun.)
0 votedOctober 13, 20141Confusions about the job
I work as a project manager in a multinational firm, and have some confusions about this position as below
Firstly, i think a PM should be a leader of a team, and direct the internal execution of the spec, quantity, and schedule of the all the phases of the project from kick-off through production. However, in reality, there is no power in the PM's hand, so meaning that others function departments don't support our work very well. For example, provide the often reports are not submitted on time, individuals don't implement the work you assigned in time, or individuals are vague and unfocused on their work. In these cases, I have to face a lot of complains from clients, side since we are the bridges between the customer and the factory. Sometimes i feel tired but have no idea how to fix the problems (this sentence is unclear, so I am not sure what your meaning is). I think it there must be a problem of with our firm's management system. I advise that a PM should manger a part of the performance of the team members, maybe 50%, and the other another half should be managed by from their directors. This way, the PM can manage the project smoothly, but and have seem high-level do care of that,.
How about your situation or your firm's management system? Please give me some advises on how to do the job well. Moreover please help me to correct the composition kindly.0 votedJune 30, 20141
