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About Quip Several days before, I found a APP in Apple Store, which name is Quip. Quip is a online writing and chatting service, it allow many people to write a document in the same time. I think it's a great invention. I have several friends in different cities. We haven't see each other for many years. I introduce Quip to them, and they join Quip system immediately. We began to write a Chinese novel in Quip from then. The novel connect use together again. We all thank Quip. Quip is very intelligent for the same time operation. If my friend is writing a paragraph, I can see a lock icon before the paragraph, it means I cannot modify the paragraph at the same time. In computer software field, it is belonging to a technology of network synchronization computing. The friends ourselves are very happy in Quip. But Quip is not a full free payment software. If I want to share my document to more than 5 people (not include the exact 5 number), I should pay money for Quip. It is the business in Quip company. I search Quip in Baidu, find Quip is founded in 2012 by the previous CTO in Facebook. I think he is very clever, because he found some fresh requirement of people - Chatting need based on something, e.g., a document.

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About Quip

Several days beforeago, I found an APP in the Apple Store, which named is Quip. Quip is a online writing and chatting service, and it allows many people to write a document in at the same time. I think it's a great invention.

I have several friends in different cities. We haven't seen each other for many years. I introduced Quip to them, and they joined the Quip system immediately. We then began to write a Chinese novel in Quip from then. The novel connects us together again. We all thank Quip (We are all thankful for Quip).

Quip is very intelligent works well for the same time operation real-time operations. If my friend is writing a paragraph, I can see a lock icon before the paragraph. It means I cannot modify the paragraph at the same time. In the computer software field, it is belonging to a a type of technology called network synchronization computing.

The friends ourselves We are very happy in Quip. But Quip, however, is not a fully free payment software. If I want to share my document to more than 5 people (not include the exact 5 number), I should must pay money to use Quip. It is the business in Quip company.

I searched Quip in Baidu, and found that Quip was founded in 2012 by the previous CTO of Facebook. I think he is very clever, because he found some a fresh requirement of people - Chatting need based on something, e.g., a document via a document.


Good job. Be careful with your verb tenses (you sometimes switch between present and past tenses abruptly.) Additionally, you generally should not begin a sentence with a conjunction (and, but, etc.)

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Quip support APP in Android or iOS, but not in WindowsPhone. On PC, you can use any modern browser to open https://www.quip.com to visit it.
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https://www.quip.com

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